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Fudge Freak

Dessert tonight, sir?
Yes, a hot fudge sundae please
and hold the ice cream

and that fake cherry
Lose the whipped cream and nuts too
Give it to me straight 

***For Linda Marie's contest

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August 15, 2010 at 9:33 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest! I'm know I'm late with this but haven't been spending much time at The Soup in recent weeks. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen

Sharon Winter

July 19, 2010 at 10:28 AM

LOL Tim, this was a delight and congrats on your win! Must confess I am a fudge freak too!!! Actually, anything chocolate will do : )). Thanks so much for your wonderful comment, so appreciated. love, shar xo

Lynette Chachere

July 11, 2010 at 9:44 PM

lol.fake cherry.haha, interesting senryu sir! i bet that fudge sundae is delicious. & thats fascinating that you have a daughter by the name of Lynette, awesome. sorry for the late reply, i haven't been on!(: ~Always&Forever Lynette

Andrea Dietrich

June 18, 2010 at 10:57 PM

hmmm, so all you are eating then is the FUDGE SAUCE well it sure saves on calories. Hey, I LIKE those fake cherries!! This was great. LUv, andrea ps Congrats!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

June 13, 2010 at 8:26 PM

haha this is really cute, Tim :) that last line of yours said it all :) congrats with your win! -nikko :)

Debbie Guzzi

June 12, 2010 at 8:26 PM

Hey there been missing your repartee!...you need to put SUMMER on the bottom sweetie pie! Light & Love Cher

Carolyn Devonshire

June 7, 2010 at 8:00 PM

Congratulations on your success in the contest, Tim! A plate full of hot fudge would be my dream dessert too! Love, Carolyn

Elaine George

June 7, 2010 at 6:39 PM

Love this one, Tim. Congratulatins on your win. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 7, 2010 at 7:22 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's Dreamy Desserts contest Tim. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

June 7, 2010 at 6:38 AM

Funny and to the point..congrats on your success in the contest. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 6, 2010 at 1:39 PM

Congrats Tim on your HM in my dessert contest... and for your constant support to make them all FUN.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

June 5, 2010 at 10:40 PM

So nice to see you posting again, Tim. As a hard-core chocoholic I can relate to your desire to hold the ice cream and other dressings. Just the hot fudge will do nicely! Very funny, but true for me as well as for you apparently. Love, Carolyn

June 5, 2010 at 5:01 PM

I'll take the whip cream--lose the fake cherry for me too. No ice cream--what the heck! Now, I have to have that. Ha! Ha! As you can see I got into this one. You have me chuckling. Best wishes in the contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 5, 2010 at 1:58 PM

Thank you for sharing you poetry with us Tim. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Hope you have a wonderful weekend running over with inspiration. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 5, 2010 at 3:55 AM

A nice dessert. Good luck in the contest

Poet Destroyer A

June 4, 2010 at 9:59 PM

lol ... funny one,,, enjoyed and best wishes on the contest

Iolanda Scripca

June 4, 2010 at 9:13 PM

Then I'll take the whip cream and nuts, ice cream and cherry...may I have a little hot fudge too ? :)

June 4, 2010 at 8:21 PM

Just hot fudge! Can't say it would be my choice but the poem is enjoyable just the same. Good luck in the contest! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen