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Frustrated, First-Rate

~ Frustration, first-rate ~ Plan-free poem penning produces enthusiastic endorsement Carefully-crafted couplets ~ collapse

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/30/2019 9:44:00 AM

Great aliteration my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/30/2019 1:15:00 PM

Thanks for noticing the alliteration, Caren. :-) gw

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 10/29/2019 6:20:00 AM

Absolutely true Gershon. I always wonder how greatly people write following Meters and other rules of writing!! I always think why will I not be able to write taking parameters into consideration. I always allow my mind to pour it's thoughts and emotions and the result is a free verse. Your poem just reflected what I always felt.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/29/2019 11:42:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your insights with me, Swetha, and for the feedback on this little poem. Warmest wishes, Gershon

Hello There

Date: 10/28/2019 9:32:00 PM

I've noticed that, too, Gershon... The most simple pieces I post and worry are not worthy of notice seem to get the most attention. It baffles me 8-) I enjoyed this piece of yours!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/29/2019 11:38:00 AM

Yeah, you just never really know what people are going to like, I guess. Thanks, H.T. Smiles, Gershon

Bobby May

Date: 10/28/2019 9:12:00 PM

Ya what Sandra said Gershon, she took the words right out of my mouth, lol Interesting thoughts my friend!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/29/2019 11:37:00 AM

Did Sandra ask permission to take those words out of your mouth, my friend?! LOL. Thanks, Bobby! Smiles, Gershon

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/28/2019 9:04:00 PM

perhaps the couplets collapses but this one succeeded.... :) goodnight friend! Hugs

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/29/2019 11:37:00 AM

Thank you for such a nice, supportive comment on this one, Sandra. ~ Collapsed