Fruit of the Groom

groom and doom splendour for trauma begs a birthright ~ vengeance pure and blind

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Beej Simrov

Date: 7/7/2024 3:52:00 PM

I love the line "trauma begs a birthright"...you truly are a master in the art of saying much with few words.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/23/2024 8:45:00 PM

I see you haven't written much lately. However I have news for you. French cuisine considers pigeon pie a delicacy. Might try it and get rid of their droppings which are dirtying our streets. But I have a tender heart and I hate to wring their necks to kill them :) So our streets remain dirty. Pesky pigeons.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/27/2024 6:54:00 AM

As much as I love them, I too would like to try dining on squab, I hear it’s a delicious meat, and apparently cleaner than chicken. ;) xomo

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/8/2024 9:20:00 PM

Darn I missed you and your wit. Hope you're well.