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Frozen Souvenirs

[ [ [ [ ..... ] ] ] ] frozen with pain she woke to find daybreak slumped on her crumpled bed again, laid back, cast aside from god knows what, an unbecoming haven. at least, this time, this bed was hers and hers alone, dimly broiled by smells of yesterday gone stale, drooping limbs to vaguely unbecoming souvenirs. no longer wrestling fires but lighting them, hope drained from flesh that craved for expired lotion crush-boned dreams mocked her unbecoming senses. she backed off tears that asked how this all happened, plunging into her heart’s junkyard searching for answers from wounds buried in near burial of an unbecoming night… copyright (c) ....................... For P.D.'s "Collaborate with Me"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/21/2011 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your co-write win in P.D.'s "Collaborate With Me" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2011 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D.,nette
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Date: 9/17/2011 8:50:00 AM
A wonderful colab and win, congrats my dear friend....always Michael
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Date: 9/16/2011 1:15:00 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, Nette : )
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Date: 9/16/2011 11:08:00 AM
great job congrats on your win..cory
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Date: 9/16/2011 8:10:00 AM
Congrats Nette luv on your HM in this wonderful collab contest with PD.. amazing words as always my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 9/16/2011 1:58:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your H.M.... Thank you for the joy of working with you... I wish i would have seen my half on here... but, that is okay.... i know we it came out wonderful.... have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 7/23/2011 10:43:00 PM
ooooo! yes... i will work on this right now,..p.d.
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Date: 7/21/2011 12:42:00 PM
ah an exotic start..and know PD will give is a superlative addition for an end.. mesmerizing words appear on blank page to enthrall and impress ..luv the being in bed alone and that line f the smells of yesterday.. another wow ..entry ..good luck..anxious to read more..luv..
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Date: 7/21/2011 11:22:00 AM
Would be interesting to see where this collaboration end up Nette ;) will check back on it when Pd has added hers.. *hugs*
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Date: 7/21/2011 11:04:00 AM
Very touching write Nette.Best wishes.
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Date: 7/21/2011 9:41:00 AM
A dark but poetic write, with some very good imagery. Love, Robert.
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Date: 7/21/2011 6:09:00 AM
sad thoughts....
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