Frozen Souvenirs

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frozen with pain she woke to find daybreak
slumped on her crumpled bed again, laid back, cast 
aside from god knows what, an unbecoming haven.

at least, this time, this bed was hers and hers alone,
dimly broiled by smells of yesterday gone
stale, drooping limbs to vaguely unbecoming souvenirs.

no longer wrestling fires but lighting them,
hope drained from flesh that craved for expired lotion
crush-boned dreams mocked her unbecoming senses.

she backed off tears that asked how this all happened,
plunging into her heart’s junkyard searching for answers
from wounds buried in near burial of an unbecoming night…



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For  P.D.'s "Collaborate with Me"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 12:18 PM
Congratulations on your co-write win in P.D.'s "Collaborate With Me" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D.,nette
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September 17, 2011 at 8:50 AM
A wonderful colab and win, congrats my dear friend....always Michael
Horne Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 1:15 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, Nette : )
Long Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 11:08 AM
great job congrats on your win..cory
Sweetheart Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 8:10 AM
Congrats Nette luv on your HM in this wonderful collab contest with PD.. amazing words as always my friend.. enjoy with luv..
A   Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 1:58 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your H.M.... Thank you for the joy of working with you... I wish i would have seen my half on here... but, that is okay.... i know we it came out wonderful.... have a nice one,..p.d.
A   Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 10:43 PM
ooooo! yes... i will work on this right now,..p.d.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 12:42 PM
ah an exotic start..and know PD will give is a superlative addition for an end.. mesmerizing words appear on blank page to enthrall and impress ..luv the being in bed alone and that line f the smells of yesterday.. another wow ..entry ..good luck..anxious to read more..luv..
Neels Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 11:22 AM
Would be interesting to see where this collaboration end up Nette ;) will check back on it when Pd has added hers.. *hugs*
Poet Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 11:04 AM
Very touching write Nette.Best wishes.
Zzzzz Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 9:41 AM
A dark but poetic write, with some very good imagery. Love, Robert.
Culverhouse Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 6:09 AM
sad thoughts....
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