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Written for the prompt " frozen side of the sun " sponsored by Edward Ibeh

Frozen Side of The Sun

Trust ~ 
a mourning sparrow
f o r s a k e n in the russet rush
of monstrous myths,
clouding the cashmere cusp
of dawn’s delicate arms~ 
of love’s liquefied thorn.
While I trace the wrinkled rays
on the frozen side of the sun,
where the moon, in silence,
peeks to speak
nothing but dialects of the forgotten ~
ash-laced memories
forged in veins of weeping ice
into the form of this
black diamond heart,
aching in nostalgia,
refusing to break
when your name ~ still dulcet ~
bruised the air
like a fairytale
lost in the wintry wilderness,
as petals of promises wilt,
painting a landscape of lament.

Perhaps
I reigned in the ruins ~ 
             an unthawed queen,
gliding glacier dunes,
played like a pawn,
sculpted in life’s illusions.
I’ve tasted
the flames of Cupid’s
frost-kissed arrows,
while seeking comfort
in checkered longing,
within squares of solitude…

Now I hide honesty
behind chained chambers
of a kingdom
unmoved by jest or foolish games.
They know not
the storm within me,
that weighs heavier
than the crestfallen sparks
mimicking
snow-glazed heartbeats.
Yet I know
what I knew was never reliable ~
imprisoned in gold and pearls,
threatening the throne,
as if destiny drew no other design
for the ones
who sit beneath storms,
singing tunes of tornadoes,
wishing someday
rainbow arcs would shed
their fog,
drip tangerine tones of
lucid lilac
and
carnation clarity ~ 
O heed these unspoken pleas...
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Goldsmith Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 10:38 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story again. Great Job... Have a blessed day with your win.........
George Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 4:54 AM
I knew this would be a top winner. I can't tell how much I loved this poem. Hearty Congratulations, sweet friend on your first place win.
Bordner Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 6:20 PM
"ash laced memories forged in veins of weeping ice..." that's skilfully vivid! "While seeking comfort in checkered longing, in squares of solitude..." your conflictions are soo vibrant, oft brilliant Poetess. "Carnation clarity", carnations are quite varied and beautiful, and in this context enlightening. Your plea is a power in disguise...J.A.B.
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May 15, 2025 at 1:46 PM
IE, sounds like our unthawed queen is looking for something. Seems to have been trapped on a chess board and confined to the squares there. Hope she finds what she is seeking. That would be a relief and why not have it happen. I am always the optimist when it comes to personal development and joy. Hope you have it too, of course. Smiles!
Dosanjh-Johal Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 7:10 AM
Majestic ink... Bravo. The breathless imagery and captivating alliterations... I would expect nothing less of your work. Not to mention the powerful emotive response. Magical.
George Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 12:32 AM
Why should I wax eloquent on the power of your poetry! It speaks for itself. From where do you get all these metaphors, I keep wondering. "They know not the storm within me, that weighs heavier than the crestfallen sparks mimicking snow-glazed heartbeats." Though there is such a storm raging in you, you hope to see rainbow arcs appearing in the sky once the turmoil subsides. Beneath tornadoes, believe that there is calm. First rate poetry, dear friend.
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 8:58 AM
Awwn dear sweet valsa, you always make me feel good enough! Thank you so very much! This poem is where the prompt took me to. Sending you light always
Williams Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 11:06 PM
Dearest Inky your poetry always flows with such vivid emotion, and this piece is no exception. The imagery of trust as a 'mourning sparrow' and a 'black diamond heart' is just beautifully haunting. I love how you weave fragility and strength into every line, balancing nostalgia with resilience. The way you capture longing and guarded hope is simply breathtaking. Another stunning piece that lingers long after the last line...Love and Hugs
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 9:34 AM
Thank you always beautiful maria! You are so kind and generous! I am grateful for your kindness and support always . Sending you light
Seeker Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 10:08 PM
Undisputed master of alliteration, metaphors and rhythm, woven with the magic of a divine soul ~ an amazing write, IE, enjoyed.
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 9:39 AM
Awwn thank you so much, you are always so kind and supportive! Im truly grateful for your warm support! Sending you light always
Liguori Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 12:07 PM
‘ I’ve tasted the flames of Cupid’s frost-kissed arrows’… these are my favorite lines ever!!! Such a delightful poem. Thanks for sharing such an amazing write with us.
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 9:39 AM
Thank you so much dear robert! So kind of you to point out lines you loved too! Appreciate your kindness truly! Sending you light always
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 12:01 PM
Always. Your writing is splendiferous. I liked all the references to chess and the queen how she relates to it all. Very clever.
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 9:43 AM
Awwn thank you sweet andrea you are alwayss so kind and generous! Im grateful truly
Hind Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 12:00 PM
Yes, you are Ink, like Aura said. <3 This is beautiful art. The end pulled at me.
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 9:44 AM
Awwn aura is biased thank you so much sweet paige you are such a kind soul! Im grateful ! Sending you light always
Goldsmith Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 11:02 AM
What a wonderful picture for a wonderful write/story. "Good Luck" Have a lovely day/week writing away..........
Poet Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 10:52 AM
My dearest poetess friend Ink, this is an outstanding poem that delves into issues of emotional resilience, forgiveness, and the complex relationship between the individual and the cosmos. It considers the vulnerability of human emotions as well as the desire for greater knowledge and compassion in the face of adversity. The theme also includes sentiments of yearning, reflection, and the interplay of light and darkness inside one's soul. It depicts a journey of self-discovery and healing, highlighting the significance of purpose, empathy, and the transcendence of love. Best wishes for the tournament and many wonderful vibrations thrown your way.  The poem utilizes rich and powerful imagery, as well as words that convey both beauty and fragility. Phrases like "iridescence of a Swarovski swan" and "violet veil that veils the glaring darkness" generate stark visual contrasts while conveying complex emotions. Best of luck in the contest, and warm hugs.
Onpaper Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 7:42 AM
clouding the cashmere cusp of dawn’s delicate arms..ooo that imagery!! where the moon, in silence, peaks to speak nothing but dialects of the forgotten ash-laced memories… mmm that heavinesss!! Damn it’s gorgeous! while seeking comfort in checkered longing, within squares of solitude.. there is a sense of strength in that line it’s amazing!! They know not the storm within me, that weighs heavier than the crestfallen sparks.. ooo damn straigh child!!! singing tunes of tornadoes, wishing someday rainbow arcs would shed their fog,… freaking flawless! drip tangerine tones of lucid lilac and carnation clarity.. come thru alliterations.. oooooo come thruuu alliterations !! heed these unspoken pleas... oh yes!! Perfect ending to a perfect piece !!
Rhymes Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 7:36 AM
I don’t know ink , you always leave me speechless
Empress Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 7:38 AM
Since when do u call me ink? Lol now uv made me laugh thank u dahlin
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