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Frozen Mouse and Empty Paws

There was a mouse wanting out of the cold Scurried up the lead pipe wrapped up in old Blankets. Feeling safe and warm Fell asleep whilst the ice storm Came. Blankets pilled, among ice cube mold. Out in the yard the frozen mouse was thrown. Cat meowed, goody a mouse all my own. Sun came out and thawed the mouse, Lickety split in the house. Dumbfound meow empty paws left alone. 3/5/2021 3/4 true story :) cat ate the mouse or rat

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Date: 3/20/2021 3:46:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limericks!
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Date: 3/20/2021 3:16:00 PM
I agree with Line. This is delightful! Loved how your title went with the last line. Congrats, Eve.
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Date: 3/16/2021 4:57:00 AM
Delightful ~
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Date: 3/13/2021 7:20:00 PM
I can hardly believe now that you once commented to me that you'll have to give limericks a try some time, you professional, you! Nice one, Eve! :) gw
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Date: 3/12/2021 3:02:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. That poor mouse had a tough day or night and the cat went hungry. Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. Sara
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Date: 3/5/2021 12:52:00 PM
lol, had a chuckle here
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Date: 3/5/2021 11:14:00 AM
LOL LOL - this poem is so humorous, I sincerely hope it wins, I love any cat and mouse poems, and even Tom and Jerry I love to watch. Wonderful write Eve. Enjoy the upcoming weekend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/5/2021 6:02:00 AM
Cute... Loved it. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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Date: 3/5/2021 4:33:00 AM
Haha good ones Eve, best of luck in the contest, I hope you are keeping well. Tom
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Date: 3/5/2021 2:20:00 AM
A funny pair of limericks. Best for a win.
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