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3/9/2025 for Memories Lost Within A Frozen Mist Poetry Contest sponsored by Sara Jama

Old, I'm on the book's last page. I recall coming of age. I was just fifteen. My eyes opened, I could see - not just what was wanted from me. I remember ev'ry scene. In my heart and soul I found a feeling so profound - a reason to live. My consciousness sent reeling, but love is more than feeling. One must know how to give. The pain was too much to bear - never more to care. A life lived in between, a secret in my heart's chamber, frozen like an ant in amber - I don't know what it means.

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Date: 3/11/2025 7:03:00 AM
"Love is more than feeling. One must know how how to give" So True. Have Good Days
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David Crandall
Date: 3/11/2025 7:59:00 AM
Thanks Anisha, same to you!

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