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Frozen Joe

FROZEN JOE/ A hardy young fellow called Joe Went out with no clothes in the snow Certain bits turned to ice And then snapped off – not nice So he now spells his name J-o 30th December 2020 Winter Snow or Ice contest Sponsor - Tania Kitchin

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Patrick Mehr

Date: 1/12/2021 4:22:00 AM

I never did care for this type of poem/limerick(?). Seems better suited for the playground/locker room. Good luck with it all.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2021 4:08:00 AM

A good chuckling one. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2021 12:06:00 PM

HA!! I had to think a second on that ending!! But it's a great twist. Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/8/2021 3:37:00 PM

sure made me wince lol, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Feltham

Date: 1/8/2021 11:38:00 AM

Brilliant. Definitely a favourite of mine. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Mark Koplin

Date: 1/8/2021 7:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, ouch!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/8/2021 5:54:00 AM

Haha! Congratulations on the win Bryn! Linda

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/8/2021 4:08:00 AM

Bryn, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny limerick!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/30/2020 4:25:00 PM

G’day Bryn … I guess it saved the cost of an operation. I’ll admit I cringed a little bit - Happy New Year Bryn - Lindsay