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Frozen In Time

Light tropic breezes
carry colorful balloons
across taro fields

While ancient homesteads
dotting the quiet landscape
stand frozen in time








Written on 5/24/2015
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Poet Destroyer A

June 15, 2015 at 8:45 PM

nice win, Luv ~LINDA~

Alexis Y.

June 14, 2015 at 12:27 PM

Congratulations on your win:)Alexis

Skat A

June 13, 2015 at 9:07 PM

LAURA. Congratulations, thank you for the Picture Perfect Haiku **SKAT**

Laura Leiser

June 13, 2015 at 10:07 PM

Yay! Thank you so much for placing me in your contest, Skat! I really appreciate it:)

Poet Tacito

May 29, 2015 at 9:44 AM

An absolutely touching capture of just one of many gifts life gives to us, yet we often do not appreciate. Excellent lines.

Funom Makama

May 28, 2015 at 10:27 AM

Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!

Laura Leiser

May 28, 2015 at 1:18 PM

Thanks, Funom! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the rating, too :)

Pandita Sietesantos

May 27, 2015 at 10:43 AM

Laura, I enjoyed this beautifully written double haiku! The imagery is so lovely! Well done, my friend! Pandita

Laura Leiser

May 27, 2015 at 11:46 AM

Thank you, Pandita, for your kind and encouraging comments! I appreciate it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 25, 2015 at 12:51 PM

- Beautiful haiku, Laura - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser

May 25, 2015 at 1:40 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise, for stopping by to comment on my poem :)

Kp Nunez

May 25, 2015 at 12:19 PM

Just beautiful. Great imagery here, Laura.A 7. Blessings for the contest! . Kim

Laura Leiser

May 25, 2015 at 1:44 PM

Thanks so much, Kim! I really appreciate you stopping by and the rating, too!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

May 25, 2015 at 9:26 AM

Love the blend of two images which you cleverly weave!! olive eloisa :)!

Laura Leiser

May 25, 2015 at 11:18 AM

Thank you very much for your kind comments, Olive. I appreciate them :)

Constance La France

May 25, 2015 at 1:42 AM

Laura, very nice, love how you combined the two visuals and created these lovely haiku's, very creative 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, burning daylight day lily

Laura Leiser

May 25, 2015 at 8:13 AM

Thank you very much for your kind words and comments, Broken Wings :)