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Frozen In Crystalline - Number2

Fresh snowflakes fall, wistful from flight - like yesterdays, our once warm bench fades.

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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 12/9/2014 6:19:00 AM

Congratulations over your winning hearts.Well done.Regards dear poet Saunders.

Skat A

Date: 11/30/2014 1:48:00 AM

Hello Rhonda, Congratulations on your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/30/2014 12:15:00 AM

yesss.. congrats on your top win, rhonda.. fascinating!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/29/2014 10:17:00 PM

Stunning imagery Rhonda! Congrats on ur winning awesome write my dear!

David Meade

Date: 11/29/2014 4:21:00 PM

Here's to you and future warm benches!! You rock girl . . .

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/29/2014 3:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place top spot win Rhonda with this beautiful Crystalline.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/29/2014 12:48:00 PM

beautiful Rhonda a stunning write congrats on win hugs

Earl Schumacker

Date: 11/29/2014 12:20:00 PM

Hi Rhonda, Nice visuals and images. Nicely structured also. Great job and excellent win. Good for you. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl

Jan Allison

Date: 11/29/2014 12:11:00 PM

simply stunning Rhonda many congrats on the top spot:-) Hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 11/29/2014 10:21:00 AM

congratulations on your win ,well deserved

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/29/2014 10:17:00 AM

Excellent, Congratulations on your first place win.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/29/2014 8:35:00 AM

I can see why your poem got top spot.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/29/2014 8:10:00 AM

Such a nice verse, Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

David Mohn

Date: 11/29/2014 8:08:00 AM

Wonderful marriage of beauty and melancholy...big congrats

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/29/2014 7:34:00 AM

Rhonda, congratulations on your 1st place win for your wonderful and so powerful Crystalline! Your words spoke volumes! Hugs, Sandra

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2014 7:04:00 AM

Congrats on your winning entry..There were some very creative works on the list..Such a talented group of writers gathered at this soup pot..Thanks for dropping by with congrats..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/29/2014 6:09:00 AM

love this esp the second line. :) whatta reflection you gave me!!!wow!kudos!

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2014 6:07:00 AM

Congrats on a great win Rhonda

Len Gasun

Date: 11/29/2014 1:32:00 AM

This is stunning! Big congrats my dear friend Rhonda for the well-deserved topmost win! Hugs n cheers! love lots, Leonora

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2014 12:32:00 AM

wow, rhonda. I was wondering who could have written this one! simply gorgeous, and I love the way you worked the park bench into the poem as a symbol of faded dreams. Pure nostalgia. Poets should know by now that this is the kind of stuff that grabs me!!

Joseph May

Date: 11/24/2014 4:47:00 PM

This is the best one for that number that I have seen...well penned Rhonda...best wishes

Paul Callus

Date: 11/24/2014 3:07:00 PM

Wistful....yes...but fresh snowflakes ought to cover the past and usher in new hopes. Of course, easier said than done! // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 5:11:00 AM

Back with congratulations, Rhonda...very much deserved! // paul

Sandip Goswami

Date: 11/24/2014 1:44:00 PM

Maximum effects with minimum materials..I love it...Thank you very much...Best wishes from my warm-blooded heart...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/24/2014 9:08:00 AM

Beautiful imagery with a tinge of sadness. I chose the same photo but imagined a frozen lake under a light layer of snow.

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/22/2014 3:28:00 PM

Hi Rhonda, I really like your Crystalline! Nice verbal imagery portrayed from the picture. Good luck in the contest! Hugs, Sandra