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Frozen In Crystalline - 2

FROZEN IN CRYSTALLINE - 2

The icy feather flakes flitter hush--
swirl free to sprawl on midnight mush.

©O.E. Guillermo
Sponsor	Andrea Dietrich
Contest Name	Frozen In Crystalline 
Placed 5th

5:22 pm, November 24, 2014

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2014

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 11/30/2014 6:44:00 PM A lovely winter scene, Olive! Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/6/2015 7:38:00 AM thanks much Rhonda.. :)! hugs too

Skat A Date: 11/30/2014 1:52:00 AM OLIVE, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~ Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/6/2015 7:39:00 AM thanks much Skat.. :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/30/2014 12:37:00 AM eloi, you thrill me with your flowing words.. ang galeng!..cheers to you for your great win Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/6/2015 7:39:00 AM thanks much Nette.. :) GAling mo din.. :)!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/29/2014 10:33:00 PM Wonderful imagery Olive! Congrats on ur awesome win! Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/6/2015 7:41:00 AM thanks much Dr. Upma.. :D

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/29/2014 9:33:00 PM Congratulations Olive on your win! Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/29/2014 1:04:00 PM wonderful Olive congrats on win hugs Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/6/2015 7:40:00 AM thanks much Shadow.. :)!

Jan Allison Date: 11/29/2014 12:16:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/29/2014 8:46:00 AM Nicely done Olive. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/29/2014 10:03:00 PM thanks much Sir.. :)!

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/29/2014 7:09:00 AM Congrats on your winning entry..There were some very creative works on the list..Such a talented group of writers gathered at this soup pot....Sara Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/6/2015 7:39:00 AM thanks much Sara.. :) You are talented too.. :D!

Paul Callus Date: 11/29/2014 5:41:00 AM Back with merited congratulations, Olive_eloi!! I had no doubt this would be on the winners' list. hugs // paul Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 11/29/2014 1:48:00 AM I love what you did here my dear friend Olive! Thumbs up and big congratulations on your well-deserved win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/6/2015 7:37:00 AM Thanks much Leonora.. :)! I appreciate it. :) God bless you always..

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/29/2014 12:43:00 AM Love the first line's alliteration, dear. great imagery! And congrats to you. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/30/2014 9:06:00 AM :) thanks much Andrea.. :)!

Paul Callus Date: 11/26/2014 3:50:00 PM Hi Olive_eloi! You make these icy flakes sound nice and attractive, mostly through use of alliteration. I like:) hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/26/2014 4:47:00 PM hahahah Paul.. :) I tried to incorporate as much poetical devices in these two lines.. :O though i hope it's okei.. :) thanks as always.. :) there are sound words, alliteration, metaphor, rhyme.. :O

James Fraser Date: 11/25/2014 1:55:00 PM Love when so few words image so much, James :) Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 11/26/2014 12:03:00 PM As is mine Olive, good start if I may say you :):) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/26/2014 8:39:00 AM :) thanks much this my first try by the way.. :D

Faye Gibson Date: 11/24/2014 2:55:00 PM Hi, Olive, Finally getting back to normal...if life ever is normal. lol. I am loving all of these two line beauties. Thanks for asking about me. How are you doing? Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/24/2014 3:12:00 PM thanks much Faye.. :) YOu crossed my mind.. :)! Im doing alright thank you.. :D

Jan Allison Date: 11/24/2014 7:58:00 AM beautiful imagery and I love the alliteration Olive- good luck:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/24/2014 3:10:00 PM thanks much Jan.,, :D shall write soon.. :D!