Brenda Meier-Hans | + Follow Poet |
Crystalline | + Fav Poem | Comment | Email | Print |

Frozen In Crystalline- Number- 6

The lake captures winter's rare beauty,
                                       before her waters crystallise.



                                    Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
                                                   11.21.2014
                                                 Syllables 9 + 8
                                                        8tth

Copyright © Brenda Meier-Hans | Year Posted 2014

Please Login to post a comment

1 2

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 11/30/2014 12:16:00 PM A lovely winter scene described, Brenda! Congrats to you on an awesome win!! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 11/30/2014 9:55:00 AM Barbara, what a beautiful piece - you captured the essence in two short lovely lines! Congratulations on your great well-deserved win! Pandita. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 11/30/2014 1:56:00 AM BRENDA, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 11/29/2014 6:26:00 PM Hi Brenda, congratulations for your win for your lovely crystalline! Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/29/2014 1:26:00 PM breath taking Brenda congrats on win hugs Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/29/2014 12:27:00 PM I cant believe i missed this little beauty first time - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/29/2014 11:31:00 AM Congrats on your winning work..There are some very interesting and descriptive works in the winner's list..A fine group of poets gather at this soup pot..Sara Login to Reply

Robert Stoner Jr Date: 11/29/2014 10:24:00 AM congratulations Brenda on another fine win ,well done Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/29/2014 9:28:00 AM So good to see you on the winners list, congratulations. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 11/29/2014 6:34:00 AM Ohhh! this is very lovely, Brenda! Missed it before, but luckily found it on the winners' list! I can imagine the reflections, before that natural mirror gives way to ice. Congrats on a deserved win. // paul Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 11/29/2014 6:14:00 AM Wonderful write Brenda...Congrats on your win Login to Reply

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 11/29/2014 1:27:00 AM Congrats on the win Brenda and happy Weekend...huggs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/29/2014 1:01:00 AM a lovely description of picture number six, brenda. congrats in my contest and thanks for your support. Login to Reply

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 11/26/2014 5:02:00 PM your first line is captivating, i imagine frozen.. :) when elsa succeeddingly turned everything to ice.. :) Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/26/2014 5:31:00 PM Hahaha, I forgot about that but yes, that's about it.

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/25/2014 6:48:00 PM A fine portrayal of the image (winter's) and check with Andie IF the end words have to rhyme hon. LIght & Love Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/25/2014 10:38:00 PM Thanks so much Debbie.

Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/25/2014 4:35:00 AM love it Brenda gl in contest hugs Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/25/2014 7:24:00 AM Thanks Shadow.

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/24/2014 9:28:00 AM ohhh,i like the perceived consequence of waters being crystallized,brenda... how unique and vivid!.. huggs Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 2:47:00 PM Thank you Nette

Cherl Dunn Date: 11/23/2014 9:23:00 PM Simply beautiful, cheri Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 2:47:00 PM Thanks Cheri

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/23/2014 6:46:00 AM Beautiful, Brenda. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 2:45:00 PM Thanks Maurice.

Gary Bateman Date: 11/22/2014 4:20:00 PM Brenda, A very well-penned write here and a "7" from me. Good Luck in the contest!! I'm sure you'll do very well. Alles Gute!! Gary Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/24/2014 2:45:00 PM Thank you Gary.

Sandip Goswami Date: 11/22/2014 1:35:00 PM Super...Multiple meanings...I love it...Thank you very much...Long live your big heart... Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/22/2014 2:33:00 PM Thank you so much Sandip

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/22/2014 9:28:00 AM This is pretty Brenda. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/22/2014 2:31:00 PM Thanks Richard.

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/22/2014 7:58:00 AM Very descriptive work ..I enjoyed the beauty captured in these few words..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/22/2014 8:16:00 AM Thanks Sara.

Reason A. Poteet Date: 11/22/2014 5:40:00 AM You capitalize on winter's beauty just beyond she turns brutal. But then again, I can visualize the next scene - graceful skaters on the ice. A beautiful crystalline, Brenda, best of luck in the judging. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/22/2014 8:15:00 AM The skaters would add to the beauty. Thanks Reason.

Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/22/2014 3:39:00 AM clever and very beautiful Brenda gl in contest hugs 7 Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/22/2014 8:14:00 AM Thank you Shadow.

1 2