Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Frozen Howl

Inside a knowledge turning cogs on this wheel
born from the darkness a heart rules supreme
fear in one wish looking towards tunnel light love
All that will remain when all turns to dust threads of life dance
kneeling weak alone humble and meek finding a balance

Weeping rivers flow haunting sea waves turn the key
truth is something beautiful touching deeply chords
Chilling whispers rise warm oasis warmly embraces hold
creeping inside beauty beams within shadows 
Dancing starlight kissing ocean reflections twinkle
sparkle glisten teardrops coldly ripple out

Floating on a cloud of breath precious beauty
a mystery that means something special 
finest mother of pearl gem coloring rainbow jewel shines forever
Frozen dew quicksilver lining echoes time answers always
cold as ice crystals dazzling diamond stillness pure 

Frosted vision clear cutting ivory white one cool snowflake falls
baptism in regal glowing crowning full face splendor enchants a ball
walking along golden strands looking across the sea midnight strikes
Sleepless nights held over and back destiny calls your name
utopia faraway dreaming our love complete

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J Hamilton Gist January 4, 2016 at 1:40 PM I can feel the winter air in this one... Nice.

Clifford Woodell December 2, 2015 at 7:56 PM Great stuff here. I will say one thing though; from one writer to another that has let internet speak ruin is spelling and punctuation skills a good bit, some punctuation in there would help with making it more rhythmic. Feel free to check out some of my crappy work and critique me as i have you if you are feeling some type of way about it. *hugs and love* Clifford/Poetbynature Clifford Woodell December 2, 2015 at 7:56 PM his** see what i mean about ruined spelling? lol nah simple typo but whatever!! =P

Phatt Matt December 1, 2015 at 12:25 AM utopia is a dreamy place to be colorful read~phatt

Patricia L Graham November 30, 2015 at 6:48 AM Dear Liam ... Simply inspired and inspiring. Congratulations indeed ...

Judy Konos November 30, 2015 at 5:15 AM Congratulations on your poems being featured on Poetry Soup...delightful

Bl Devnath November 29, 2015 at 10:56 AM An excellent poem wonderfully expressed lead to such a horizon where utopia is faraway having being near. 7++. Class one poem my lovely friend. Loved always.bl

Alesia Leach February 14, 2015 at 4:14 PM a very thought provoking poem and belated congrats. ;0) Liam Mcdaid February 20, 2015 at 2:59 PM alesia thank you for the wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated bless you

Zakhe Michael Mcunu February 2, 2015 at 1:46 AM Wow great piece that makes a complete puzzle. Liam Mcdaid February 2, 2015 at 10:09 AM thank you zakhe for the truly wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Kayod5 Kayode January 15, 2015 at 2:49 PM Congrats on the win as the Poem of the week Liam.No doubt you have done a beautiful Job here that this victory compensates,kudos for a Job well done...huggs Liam Mcdaid January 15, 2015 at 3:02 PM kayode thank you ever so kindly for the very beautiful comment bless you

Carol Eastman January 15, 2015 at 1:05 PM Congratulations on Poem of the Week. It was very artfully written. Liam Mcdaid January 15, 2015 at 2:31 PM carol thank you kindly for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Jan Allison January 14, 2015 at 5:20 PM Such amazing imagery - many congrats on poem of the day:-) Hugs jan xxx Liam Mcdaid January 14, 2015 at 6:15 PM thank you kindly jan for the truly wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated bless you

Paul Callus January 14, 2015 at 3:35 PM This poem is a feast to the senses; the imagery captivating. Lovely final lines. Well done, Liam!! #7 Congrats on POTW // paul Liam Mcdaid January 14, 2015 at 4:05 PM aah thank you dear friend for the wonderful comment heartfelt beautiful paul deeply appreciated

Zakhe Michael Mcunu January 14, 2015 at 1:55 AM sweet and modest. I love it, keep up the great work. Liam Mcdaid January 14, 2015 at 3:55 PM thank you for the very beautiful comment zakhe so kind bless you deeply appreciated

M. L. Kiser January 13, 2015 at 9:58 PM A superb word-painting. Congrats! Liam Mcdaid January 14, 2015 at 11:26 AM thank you for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

Sandip Goswami January 13, 2015 at 3:12 PM Very nice images...I enjoyed your thoughts. I get peace to read your innocent creations. Best wishes to you. Thank you very much dear. Liam Mcdaid January 13, 2015 at 5:01 PM thank you so kindly sandip for the wonderful comment dear friend bless you deeply appreciated

John Fleming January 13, 2015 at 9:29 AM Beautiful poem, Liam! Well done in winning poem of the week...a worthy winner!! :-) john. Liam Mcdaid January 13, 2015 at 11:32 AM thank you kindly john for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

Dorian Petersen Potter January 13, 2015 at 5:53 AM Hi Liam! Oh, yes, I have to come back and give you my congratulations for your very beautiful poem here being chosen top poem of the week. smiling. You sure deserve it! So happy for you! Your imagery is flawless and so incredible, your heartfelt lines just touched and melted my very heart in every possible way my dearest friend Liam. smiling. Yes, congrats and enjoy all your week! A very solid 10 +++from me! You truly got a mighty golden pen! .smiling. God bless you always ! Have a lovely day be safe! :) Love and hugs! xoxxxoxx D.^0^ Liam Mcdaid January 13, 2015 at 8:35 AM thank you dorian dear friend for the truly beautiful comment bless you deeply appreciated

James Ranahan January 13, 2015 at 12:35 AM Thank you for your poem. I read it then reached down for a different look faraway, then turned back across the sea, and wanted what you had. Jim Liam Mcdaid January 13, 2015 at 8:31 AM jim alone just dreaming in a distant love deep howling bless you thank you kindly for the truly heartfelt comment deep,ly appreciated

Geetha Jayakumar January 12, 2015 at 1:08 PM A Beautiful poem with fantastic imagery captured in this poem make it every glowing. Very true said in concluding lines, back destiny calls your name utopia faraway dreaming our love complete. Congrats for the beautiful poem chosen, poem of the day. Liam Mcdaid January 13, 2015 at 8:23 AM geetha thank you so kindly for the truly very beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you

Maurice Yvonne January 12, 2015 at 10:31 AM Congratulations my friend your beautiful poem being chosen poem of the week. Liam Mcdaid January 13, 2015 at 7:08 AM thank you so much maurice for the beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

Thomas Carney January 12, 2015 at 9:20 AM Oh, yes, congrats on top poem of the week.

Thomas Carney January 12, 2015 at 9:19 AM Now knowing more about your poetry, this poem was so rich in imagery I was waiting for a "cutting phrase" and got it on the last line. Love no complete in a faraway dream; utopia. Very colorful. Congrats Thomas Liam Mcdaid January 12, 2015 at 6:39 PM thank you thomas for the heartfelt very beautiful comment yes love complete a faraway dream bless you pal and once again thanks dear friend

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 12, 2015 at 8:00 AM Incredible imagery, Liam, and heartfelt lines! Congrats to you on being chosen TPOW!! Have a blessed week...hugs, Rhonda Liam Mcdaid January 12, 2015 at 6:32 PM thank you rhonda for the truly wonderful comment you also have a wonderful week bless you

Eileen Manassian January 12, 2015 at 5:21 AM Beautiful imagery that climaxes in those last two lines of heartfelt emotions, Liam. Congrats, my dear friend on have your poem being featured as Poem of the Week. I'm happy for you. Hugs Liam Mcdaid January 12, 2015 at 6:08 PM ah eileen your so sweet dear pal thank you kindly for the truly wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther January 11, 2015 at 5:11 PM Hello Liam. Congratulations on poem of the Week. Mighty fine literature. Write more. Write often. Liam Mcdaid January 12, 2015 at 5:57 PM val thank you kindly for wonderful heartfelt comment deeply appreciated

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