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Frozen Howl

Inside a knowledge turning cogs on this wheel born from the darkness a heart rules supreme fear in one wish looking towards tunnel light love All that will remain when all turns to dust threads of life dance kneeling weak alone humble and meek finding a balance Weeping rivers flow haunting sea waves turn the key truth is something beautiful touching deeply chords Chilling whispers rise warm oasis warmly embraces hold creeping inside beauty beams within shadows Dancing starlight kissing ocean reflections twinkle sparkle glisten teardrops coldly ripple out Floating on a cloud of breath precious beauty a mystery that means something special finest mother of pearl gem coloring rainbow jewel shines forever Frozen dew quicksilver lining echoes time answers always cold as ice crystals dazzling diamond stillness pure Frosted vision clear cutting ivory white one cool snowflake falls baptism in regal glowing crowning full face splendor enchants a ball walking along golden strands looking across the sea midnight strikes Sleepless nights held over and back destiny calls your name utopia faraway dreaming our love complete

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J Hamilton Gist

Date: 1/4/2016 1:40:00 PM

I can feel the winter air in this one... Nice.

Clifford Woodell

Date: 12/2/2015 7:56:00 PM

Great stuff here. I will say one thing though; from one writer to another that has let internet speak ruin is spelling and punctuation skills a good bit, some punctuation in there would help with making it more rhythmic. Feel free to check out some of my crappy work and critique me as i have you if you are feeling some type of way about it. *hugs and love* Clifford/Poetbynature

Clifford Woodell
Date: 12/2/2015 7:56:00 PM

his** see what i mean about ruined spelling? lol nah simple typo but whatever!! =P

Phatt Matt

Date: 12/1/2015 12:25:00 AM

utopia is a dreamy place to be colorful read~phatt

Patricia L Graham

Date: 11/30/2015 6:48:00 AM

Dear Liam ... Simply inspired and inspiring. Congratulations indeed ...

Judy Konos

Date: 11/30/2015 5:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your poems being featured on Poetry Soup...delightful

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/29/2015 10:56:00 AM

An excellent poem wonderfully expressed lead to such a horizon where utopia is faraway having being near. 7++. Class one poem my lovely friend. Loved always.bl

Alesia Leach

Date: 2/14/2015 4:14:00 PM

a very thought provoking poem and belated congrats. ;0)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 2/20/2015 2:59:00 PM

alesia thank you for the wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated bless you

Zakhe Michael Mcunu

Date: 2/2/2015 1:46:00 AM

Wow great piece that makes a complete puzzle.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 2/2/2015 10:09:00 AM

thank you zakhe for the truly wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/15/2015 2:49:00 PM

Congrats on the win as the Poem of the week Liam.No doubt you have done a beautiful Job here that this victory compensates,kudos for a Job well done...huggs

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/15/2015 3:02:00 PM

kayode thank you ever so kindly for the very beautiful comment bless you

Carol Eastman

Date: 1/15/2015 1:05:00 PM

Congratulations on Poem of the Week. It was very artfully written.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/15/2015 2:31:00 PM

carol thank you kindly for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Jan Allison

Date: 1/14/2015 5:20:00 PM

Such amazing imagery - many congrats on poem of the day:-) Hugs jan xxx

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/14/2015 6:15:00 PM

thank you kindly jan for the truly wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated bless you

Paul Callus

Date: 1/14/2015 3:35:00 PM

This poem is a feast to the senses; the imagery captivating. Lovely final lines. Well done, Liam!! #7 Congrats on POTW // paul

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/14/2015 4:05:00 PM

aah thank you dear friend for the wonderful comment heartfelt beautiful paul deeply appreciated

Zakhe Michael Mcunu

Date: 1/14/2015 1:55:00 AM

sweet and modest. I love it, keep up the great work.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/14/2015 3:55:00 PM

thank you for the very beautiful comment zakhe so kind bless you deeply appreciated

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/13/2015 9:58:00 PM

A superb word-painting. Congrats!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/14/2015 11:26:00 AM

thank you for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

Sandip Goswami

Date: 1/13/2015 3:12:00 PM

Very nice images...I enjoyed your thoughts. I get peace to read your innocent creations. Best wishes to you. Thank you very much dear.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/13/2015 5:01:00 PM

thank you so kindly sandip for the wonderful comment dear friend bless you deeply appreciated

John Fleming

Date: 1/13/2015 9:29:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Liam! Well done in winning poem of the week...a worthy winner!! :-) john.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/13/2015 11:32:00 AM

thank you kindly john for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/13/2015 5:53:00 AM

Hi Liam! Oh, yes, I have to come back and give you my congratulations for your very beautiful poem here being chosen top poem of the week. smiling. You sure deserve it! So happy for you! Your imagery is flawless and so incredible, your heartfelt lines just touched and melted my very heart in every possible way my dearest friend Liam. smiling. Yes, congrats and enjoy all your week! A very solid 10 +++from me! You truly got a mighty golden pen! .smiling. God bless you always ! Have a lovely day be safe! :) Love and hugs! xoxxxoxx D.^0^

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/13/2015 8:35:00 AM

thank you dorian dear friend for the truly beautiful comment bless you deeply appreciated

James Ranahan

Date: 1/13/2015 12:35:00 AM

Thank you for your poem. I read it then reached down for a different look faraway, then turned back across the sea, and wanted what you had. Jim

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/13/2015 8:31:00 AM

jim alone just dreaming in a distant love deep howling bless you thank you kindly for the truly heartfelt comment deep,ly appreciated

Geetha Jayakumar

Date: 1/12/2015 1:08:00 PM

A Beautiful poem with fantastic imagery captured in this poem make it every glowing. Very true said in concluding lines, back destiny calls your name utopia faraway dreaming our love complete. Congrats for the beautiful poem chosen, poem of the day.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/13/2015 8:23:00 AM

geetha thank you so kindly for the truly very beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/12/2015 10:31:00 AM

Congratulations my friend your beautiful poem being chosen poem of the week.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/13/2015 7:08:00 AM

thank you so much maurice for the beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

Thomas Carney

Date: 1/12/2015 9:20:00 AM

Oh, yes, congrats on top poem of the week.

Thomas Carney

Date: 1/12/2015 9:19:00 AM

Now knowing more about your poetry, this poem was so rich in imagery I was waiting for a "cutting phrase" and got it on the last line. Love no complete in a faraway dream; utopia. Very colorful. Congrats Thomas

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/12/2015 6:39:00 PM

thank you thomas for the heartfelt very beautiful comment yes love complete a faraway dream bless you pal and once again thanks dear friend

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/12/2015 8:00:00 AM

Incredible imagery, Liam, and heartfelt lines! Congrats to you on being chosen TPOW!! Have a blessed week...hugs, Rhonda

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/12/2015 6:32:00 PM

thank you rhonda for the truly wonderful comment you also have a wonderful week bless you

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/12/2015 5:21:00 AM

Beautiful imagery that climaxes in those last two lines of heartfelt emotions, Liam. Congrats, my dear friend on have your poem being featured as Poem of the Week. I'm happy for you. Hugs

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/12/2015 6:08:00 PM

ah eileen your so sweet dear pal thank you kindly for the truly wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther

Date: 1/11/2015 5:11:00 PM

Hello Liam. Congratulations on poem of the Week. Mighty fine literature. Write more. Write often.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/12/2015 5:57:00 PM

val thank you kindly for wonderful heartfelt comment deeply appreciated