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written for Edward Ibehs contest, " frozen blossom"

Frozen Blossom

O hearth of hypnotic language,
my moon in warm alphabets,
if to love you, I must drown,
and to move you, soul must listen,
let the heart trust the luminous
craft of compelling art,
where every stroke summons
liquid petals of ink to scribble
across cosmic walls
of constellations,
as this craving curates the essence
of timeless touch,
whilst jealousy becomes the flame,
burning ~ aching ~ wanting
to breathe poetic palpitations
in the fingertips of your addictive alchemy,
turning graphic graffiti
into a passionate storm 
of alienated butterflies,
with abstractions of trembling textures
outlining the truth of temptation…

Yet I sleep with black dahlias
beneath my pillow, embroidered
with erased notes of metaphors,
dreaming of you and I,
catching polaroids of sunrise,
for every frozen blossom,
bathes in scarlet streaks
of awakening light,
as we remain more than just
a rhyme wrapped in dusks of darkness ~ 
we are the cascading colors
     dancing as secrets I still bleed.

I am the crystal quartz,
chaotically calligraphing
charismatic thoughts
around the glass frames of your galaxies,
exhaling vivid visions,
inhaling what could be,
for I am a stargazer
romanticizing lilac thunder,
chasing cloudscapes of sparks,
lost in the afterglow of a dawn ~ 
draped in the gravity 
         of neon-silk verses…
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Miller Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 3:13 AM
I am in awe, as always I just love the way you write, congratulations
Seeker Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 10:51 PM
Outstanding as always, IE, you continue to surpass yourself! Warmest congratulations on your top win.
Alex Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 11:20 PM
"O hearth of hypnotic language, my moon in warm alphabets, if to love you, I must drown, and to move you, soul must listen" - A very grand classical sound resonates in your poem. Congratulations!
Empress Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 3:38 AM
Thank you so much dear CA, i appreciate your support sincerely. Sending you light alwsys
Ibeh Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 2:44 PM
Wow, yet another one of your outstanding writes, Inky. An instant fave. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest.
Empress Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 3:37 AM
Thank you so much dear EI, i can count on you for prompts that inspire me to be myself always! I really appreciate you and all that you do and for always feeling my poems! Sending you light always
Neumann Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 6:06 AM
Wonderful.
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 12:46 PM
Ohhh I really liked that polaroids of sunrise. Making it a tangible memory to keep. And I caught your contest phrase in here: if to live you, I must drown. So colorful this is. Sure to be another first place with this judge as well
Lane Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 4:45 AM
You melt the heart of readers just as you've written of the warming rays of the sun that bring back to life the frozen blossom, which leads me to one of my favorite phrases in your lines, "lost in the afterglow of a dawn ~" Incredible imagery!
Richards Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 4:30 AM
You write a mean free verse (meaning: a good one) and you don't fall into the trap of a piece of prose or flash fiction chopped into bits of lines ... Your descriptive imagery is particularly fetching.
Neumann Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 1:46 AM
Neon silk verses indeed. Loving wishes, Kai
Cunningham Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 1:38 AM
Your trademark of stunning imagery clearly evident in this well composed verse. Good luck in the contest, hope your week is going well. Tom
Liguori Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 1:22 PM
You are indeed the crystal quartz; everything that glimmers and shines in the land of poetry. Well done, as always. I enjoyed reading this poem.
Rodgers Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 10:27 AM
Dear Empress, you cracked open a whole meteor shower and just let it pour. The language is so lush it almost fogs the glass, ink turning to petals, jealousy turning to flame, butterflies turning alien. What I love is how you never settle for a single texture, everything keeps morphing, shimmering, slipping into a new element before the last one cools. The quartz stanza might be my favorite, you writing around someone’s galaxies as you’re tracing constellations with your breath. It’s wild, tender, and a little dangerous in the best way. A whole aurora of a poem. Blessings, Daniel
Buhagiar Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 3:06 AM
A poem that centres on the intense, transformative power of art and romantic obsession. The poet may be "lost" in this cosmic, neon-silk world of words, but it is through this chaos that they find their truth. A deep poem.
DiMino Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 4:22 PM
"Yet I sleep with black dahlias beneath my pillow, embroidered with erased notes of metaphors, dreaming of you and I, catching polaroids of sunrise," -- simply beautiful! "for I am a stargazer romanticizing lilac thunder, chasing cloudscapes of sparks, lost in the afterglow of a dawn ~ draped in the gravity of neon-silk verses…" -- Wonderful poet imagery. Brava!
Bordner Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 12:23 PM
A masterpiece on every metric Poetess...a FAV!!!
Pradhan Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 12:00 PM
It's beautiful...
Onpaper Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 11:38 AM
hearth of hypnotic language,.. I am already hypnotized papi!!! Do as u please!! if to love you, I must drown,. Oh no !!! Tis me who drowns by your magnificent weaves !! where every stroke summons liquid petals of ink.. oh my !! I am liquidating papi! breathe poetic palpitations.. i meaaaaan girrrrrl !!!! Palpitations!?? Um full on du dum du dum in here!!!! in the fingertips of your silent alchemy,…mmmmmm !!! dreaming of you and I, catching polaroids of sunrise, for every frozen blossom, look at how romantic u r !!! Mmmmm .. crystal quartz,chaotically calligraphing charismatic thoughts… ooo love a good alliteration .. for I am a stargazer romanticizing lilac thunder, .. ooooo u risksaaaay alligator!!! Talk dirty to me won’t you!!! .. ok shalll take a min in the toilet!!! This is all on you… !!
Empress Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 11:39 AM
Hahahjaa papi
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