Get Your Premium Membership

Frozen

After dousing the bride to a nice flame, in between the howls there were songs. On mud path the hoofprints came out prominently. On bullock carts they had come for a sit in, to resist, rebel or kill. All day the heat, dust & winds blurred the vision. Hills between us to feed the hate. It is nothing like the good old earth. The nascent bleed. Time of non-movement. Shadows of snow-peaks. SATISH VERMA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/30/2010 6:35:00 PM
NOt sure I understand it, but it seems very well written and I enjoyed the imagery. Luv, Andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 9/30/2010 11:46:00 AM
What an outstanding way to enjoy a day. I am so happy to be able to read the excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup today. Hope you are enjoying your day and finding much inspiration along the way Satish. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 9/30/2010 10:13:00 AM
enjoyed reading
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs