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Frosty Morning

Cold, frigid morning. Sun beams down on frosty leaves. Birds ignore the chill. Beneath the carpet of leaves They forage for breakfast.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/11/2011 10:27:00 PM
Good way to describe the birds and their activities in the fall.
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Date: 11/15/2010 10:26:00 PM
Hi Francine -- :) enjoyed how you showed the birds here continue on with their lives despite the frost :) really like the message it brings-- :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 11/13/2010 6:13:00 PM
These winged angels of nature are a lot more hardy that we think, and they are just a joy to watch. We always put out our old bread biscuits for the birds. Nice Tanka Francine >> James :)
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Date: 11/8/2010 9:15:00 AM
Always wondered how the birds survive when temperatures drop, Francine. Brilliant imagery in your fall tanka. Wishing you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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