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Frosted Frescos

Mister Jack Frost stealthily visited me again last night. When I awakened from my slumber I saw to my delight, (Like sparkling bubbles in a fine effervescent champagne), Splendid frescos that he had etched upon my windowpane! No mortal artist could e'er portray, no matter his ingenuity, The feathery touch of Mister Frost's brush with such acuity! Sunbeams playing on my windowpane brought his work to life, Accentuating wonderful geometric designs so very, very rife! In my imagination I saw palm trees swaying in the breeze, and, Waves rushing t'ward the shore, breaking on the golden strand. I saw forests of trees, their branches reaching for the sky, And a rippling stream with a rocky tor towering nearby. Cathedrals flaunt gorgeous stained glass built by the masters' guild, And by their handiwork, the teeming masses have been thrilled. But Jack Frost's lovely handicraft that adorns my windowpane, Outshines the work of mere artisans whose work seems so mundane! Alas, Old Sol quickly melts away that fleet and mystic painting. Only tiny rivulets of water like parting tears are now remaining. Ah! But never mind, Jack will be back to delight me tomorrow morn, With another of his magnificent vistas my windowpane to adorn! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/27/2010 8:54:00 AM
Hey Bob, Just wanted to say thnx for reading my piece and leaving an encouraging comment. MEans a lot to me..Congratulation to you on your win too! ....Jimmy
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Date: 10/26/2010 11:41:00 AM
Gud one ............. Thnx Bob for reading my poem.......Stumps attracting me........& gracing it with nice comments. Luv/besy wishes.........Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/24/2010 7:34:00 PM
Bob..I was delighted to read this your poem...so magically penned. Great intelligence lies here. Thanks for stopping by me, to read my poems as well...thanks for the encouragement...and thanks for your service to the country. God bless. Joy (Jew)
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Date: 10/24/2010 12:58:00 PM
Bob you weave your magic in this one. Breathtaking imagery, thanks giving me a little snow even if it's just through your words. Your comment on "mislead" made me smile. Enjoy the rest of your Sunday and the week ahead ~ Wilma
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Date: 10/24/2010 12:25:00 PM
such wondeful images and words drafted in this work of art.... your a talent my friend...Michael
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Date: 10/24/2010 8:21:00 AM
I taught violin, chamber music and string-ed at Colorado College from 1955 to 1967. I agree. The last time I visited the Springs, I was astounded. Fine picture you have painted here. Love, Dave
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Date: 10/23/2010 10:21:00 AM
"rivulets of water like parting tears" love this metaphor! As always the whole verse is magic. Did you know it has been proven by western science that water when "prayed over" changes its crystaline structure! The change occurs with either written or spoken words, each word evokes a different crystaline pattern when the water is frozen! Please input on my blog? Light & Love
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Date: 10/22/2010 2:26:00 PM
enjoyed reading your beautiful write!
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Date: 10/22/2010 12:38:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive about the mundane event of life...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreciate you taking the time to do that..Sara
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Date: 10/22/2010 6:51:00 AM
Fantastic write Bob...We have not had frosty mornings here yet, but this conveyed the cold bite to me clearly..well done, again.....Tobey
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Date: 10/22/2010 5:43:00 AM
Yes Jack Frost has visited us here in Pittsburgh too with frost everywhere .. oh how I long for Hawaii temps luv..haha.. a brilliant masterpiece extolling the touches of winter and its delights... u have captured the essence as the painter with words so wonderfully Bob... enjoyed your creativity today with luv.. happy weekend...
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Date: 10/21/2010 8:05:00 PM
INCREDIBLE imagery of Jack Frost's handiwork, 'Bob. It creates so much beauty that you hate to see the sun melt the prismatic etchings on windows. Very nicely done, my friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/21/2010 7:51:00 PM
So much fun with this one Bob. Put this one in a book! I'm just wishing for time to write. Maybe it's more fun to read your work! RAY
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Date: 10/21/2010 7:35:00 PM
Great write, Sarge. Enjoyed. Have a great weekend. Ralphie
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Date: 10/21/2010 5:54:00 PM
hey Bob, i have never seen what a cachew comes in, have you? i think of it as one of Gods gifts. i've shelled most kind of nuts but still as of yet do not know what the cachew shell looks like. and as you know as a nut it is quite a treat. and this poem is a great reminder to me that there are gifts that God gives us just to show that He is real. no two snow flakes are a like. and the patternes that salt and sugar makes while reacting to natural forces. are in deed Devine. God bless you Sir.jhl
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Date: 10/21/2010 5:39:00 PM
nice Bob H. enjoyed the image,..p.d.
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