Front Row

shared drink slowly sips
drive-in flashes preview clips…
icy face warm lips

lovenostalgiasenryu

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 24, 2011 at 10:48 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Robb. Love, Carol

Dr Hitendra Mehta

February 18, 2011 at 12:08 AM

Many Congrats Robb for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Elaine George

February 17, 2011 at 11:46 PM

Beautiful Senryu, dear Robb. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Robert A. Dufresne

February 17, 2011 at 4:49 PM

really cute one, Robb. brings back mems. Congratulations to you

Andrea Dietrich

February 17, 2011 at 2:04 PM

A really great rhyming one. Glad it's on the list. Congratulations, Robb.

Kash Poet

February 17, 2011 at 11:29 AM

Wonderful picture of love here!Congrats Robb on your well deserved win----kashinath

Sharon Ruebel

February 17, 2011 at 9:53 AM

Hello Robb, Very cute message here, love it Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar

John Freeman

February 16, 2011 at 7:16 PM

Robb, Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored place, Agape, Moses

Robert Pettit

February 16, 2011 at 6:45 PM

Congratulations on winning with this fine senryu. I thought this would have a decent chance the first time I read it.

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 16, 2011 at 5:56 PM

Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Linda, Robb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 16, 2011 at 5:36 PM

Congrats Robb on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your support always...

Andrea Dietrich

February 3, 2011 at 8:58 PM

I do miss those drive ins!! Sounds like they are out on the lawn chairs with those icy faces!!

Robert Pettit

February 3, 2011 at 7:43 PM

Do they still have drive-in movie theaters where you are? The last one around my way went out of business over thirty years ago. Your senryu describes sitting in the car waiting for showtime quite well.

Front Row

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

Member Area

Soup Social

Member Poems

Member Poets

Famous Poems

Famous Poets

Poetry Resources