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From the First Breath

From first breath, I knew I’d arrived Greeted by an Earthy balm not unlike Patchouli, I made my way through the village to my rooms. It filled the air I felt slightly intoxicated The shadows of Palm laced my skin in the sun, A serenade, the breezy rhythm of an undulating sea, guided me along. At last, I was here. I traveled alone. A cordial hint of danger heightened my awareness as I prepared for dinner. Nourished by a tropical harvest and liquor of plum and cherry, I walked into the night. Hearing voices, I stopped as something touched my shoulder. I woke up. It had been just a dream.

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Date: 6/30/2017 9:08:00 AM
This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/30/2017 12:05:00 PM
Thanks so much, Funom!
Date: 6/27/2017 11:31:00 AM
Thanks Janice!
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Date: 6/27/2017 11:03:00 AM
I really like this--especially "cordial hint of danger." Janice
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Date: 6/26/2017 9:56:00 PM
I always did like the smell of patchouli. Reminds me of a head shop. Lol "To dream, perchance to dream" Really a nice write, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/27/2017 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, Patchouli always reminds me of the '70's
Date: 6/26/2017 3:32:00 PM
Don't you just hate when that happens? You described paradise so nicely in this wonderful poem. Great job.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/26/2017 4:38:00 PM
Thanks Chris, but I still do love dreams,

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