From the First Breath

From first breath, I knew I’d arrived
Greeted by an Earthy balm not unlike Patchouli,
I made my way through the village to my rooms.
It filled the air
I felt slightly intoxicated

The shadows of Palm laced my skin in the sun,
A serenade, the breezy rhythm of an undulating sea, guided me along.
At last, I was here.

I traveled alone. A cordial hint of danger heightened my awareness as
I prepared for dinner.
Nourished by a tropical harvest and liquor of plum and cherry,
I walked into the night.
Hearing voices, I stopped as something touched my shoulder.
I woke up.
It had been just a dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Makama Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 9:08 AM
This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.
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June 30, 2017 at 12:05 PM
Thanks so much, Funom!
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June 27, 2017 at 11:31 AM
Thanks Janice!
Canerdy Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 11:03 AM
I really like this--especially "cordial hint of danger." Janice
Turner Avatar
June 26, 2017 at 9:56 PM
I always did like the smell of patchouli. Reminds me of a head shop. Lol "To dream, perchance to dream" Really a nice write, Mike.
Gentile Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 8:44 AM
Thanks Daniel, Patchouli always reminds me of the '70's
Green Avatar
June 26, 2017 at 3:32 PM
Don't you just hate when that happens? You described paradise so nicely in this wonderful poem. Great job.
Gentile Avatar
June 26, 2017 at 4:38 PM
Thanks Chris, but I still do love dreams,
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