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From the Ash Tree

Falling leaves of the ash tree
Burned to the ground
Behind you see
The embers found

Wind flows without directional need
Branches fallen lain to fritter
Spreading remains of the withered seed 
Yore the scorch the earth un wither

Sprouting stem from far you flew
Careen a trail of destination
Giving birth to hope anew 
Tree’s first breath of transpiration

Coppice recapitulate
Life perpetuate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/25/2016 11:42:00 PM
Jamison Hollo, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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Date: 6/3/2010 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Jamison. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2010 3:01:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 5/16/2010 11:00:00 PM
Unconventional sonnet, yet highly effective. Fine use of language and superior imagery! Well done, my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/12/2010 12:15:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/12/2010 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jamison. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2010 4:51:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 2/6/2010 9:57:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all ... as this delight tonight... enjoyed.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 2/6/2010 4:16:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jamison. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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