From That Shower Exit

From that shower exit I glimpse, she's caught My eyes blessed Shapely curves refreshed Be that towel, draped Tight in close, against In friction touch, such Hungered restraint This wanting await, creates Enticing souls to speak Seek, involve, evolve To revolve on silken sheets Once met, set as one Has begun, enters loves sun Shone, throng, belongs Their song voiced rejoiced.

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Date: 8/20/2020 10:02:00 AM
I love hearing you are happy, James! As always, you are very talented, especially when writing of romance. Glad to see you posting poetry again! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 8/22/2020 8:07:00 AM
Hiya Carolyn, yea life's good, and with Jamie it's even better. He's a lovely little boy, and it's priceless seeing children growing up, especially when it comes to the learning moments. A lot of my recent poetry has been kinda dark, it appears to be a comfort genre, although the odd romantic one pops up every so often. Thanks for popping by, and I trust your fine and safe from this 'Corona Chaos' that's taking a hold worldwide :( take care, and I'll look to enter more contests just to see how my future poems do, regards, James xx
Date: 8/19/2020 9:48:00 AM
a passionate piece of poetry my friend.. seems like a memory for you
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Date: 8/22/2020 7:56:00 AM
Purely words on this occasion, but it's kinda close ;) thanks kindly for popping by, James ......
Date: 8/18/2020 7:44:00 PM
Visual passion here James tactfully written and fun to read my friend...
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