Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Enclosed Rhyme

From Poetry Is Our Story

FROM POETRY IS OUR STORY

Over the rainbow curve where bright hues rush to burst, 
our hearts that long been drown now finally rush to shore.
Hands clasp tight we agreed to follow same path, same doors
ghosts from our past, slowly we will erase and nursed...

Droplets flow: sweats, smiles and blood written via our quill
a fiction for some but to us, they spell the screaming truths
of longings, of pains, awaiting to be quenched and soothe.
(God Almighty must have guided our footsteps on windless still)

Do I need a challenge to grab this one of a lifetime chance
or just hear the voice within for it tells its a Heavens giving?
Glad, I can only hymn the melody of a heartfelt thanksgiving
in the cocoon of your presence, my being fly high as I'm enhanced

Adieu to eight thousand miles as you pass it without hesitation
Before we met, our heartbeats already dance pas de deux
the smiles we shared, so noisy, they broadcasted every clues...
(Can it be that this- the beginning of positive vibrations?)

I love you, I want you and though my world may fall apart
I will not choose to let go instead I will stay with you 
'til the fish learns to fly... Allow the years to come through,
and us to permit love to grow onwards. Us in every parts!
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7:21 pm, September 12, 2015

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Noel Villarosa September 29, 2015 at 2:39 AM Congratulations, Olive, on your win. Your poem is engaging. In poem, usually tells a story, it reckons on inner feelings, pictures a moment and highlight those moments, explores emotions in a tone that could be happy, sad, exciting, mysterious and angry are all we need to complete a poetry of life. (^_^) Noel.

Michael Tor September 28, 2015 at 10:54 PM Olive congratulations!

Skat A September 28, 2015 at 10:23 PM Hi Sweet Olive..., Congratulations on your win. Forever **SKAT**"

Jan Allison September 26, 2015 at 6:07 PM Oh Olive this is a delightful love stroy you share I am so happy for you my friend and congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema September 26, 2015 at 3:39 PM Poetry just flows from your quill! Congrats Olive! Balveen

Paul Callus September 26, 2015 at 11:22 AM Pleased to be back with congratulations on your podium finish, Olive_eloi:) Will be back to you...had little time not only for Soup, but also anything online! Hugs // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 26, 2015 at 2:05 AM Very lovely dear Olive! Congrats on great win !

Alexis Y. September 25, 2015 at 9:34 PM Olive, I just by to say congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Sandra Haight September 25, 2015 at 1:32 PM So beautifully written, Olive. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper September 25, 2015 at 10:00 AM Congratulations on your write. Hugs Eve

Casarah Nance September 25, 2015 at 6:43 AM A beautiful story, all the needs laid out waiting, Grats on this winner

Ravi Sathasivam September 18, 2015 at 2:55 AM Wonderful poem. Felt your voice on the heart olive. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it

Afolabi Muideen September 15, 2015 at 5:45 PM Your noble write sized my attention through the whole read. The truth that glow within your write makes the readers to breath it, it touched their heart and soul these make it met with their like and love.... Your write is profound excellence......A.M. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 21, 2015 at 3:08 AM Afolabi thank you so much.. =`) always you comment generously.. =`)

Paul Callus September 15, 2015 at 4:44 PM You write from the heart Olive_eloi! What might initially have seemed far-fetched has matured into reality. The miles, instead of being a hindrance, served as a challenge to bring two hearts closer to each other. Together with perseverance and faith you will make this special love blossom. All the best and lots of hugs. // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 20, 2015 at 2:34 AM Yes, Paul this poem is written from the heart... it is the miles isn't a hindrance when two hearts are sincere and willing to cross it... =`) thanks much always Paul.. ~Olive Eloisa =`)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 15, 2015 at 2:06 PM - I feel your voice .... and goes hand in hand with you ...... life choices in words and writing - A wonderful poem, dear Olive - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 17, 2015 at 4:56 AM Thank you so much Anne Lise..=`) hugs back..=`)

James Fraser September 14, 2015 at 4:07 PM I love the title Olive, it's so apt for us. Your poetry simply grows and grows. This poem in particular is beautiful, capturing us, our journey, and our tomorrows, hugs//James xx tmf's xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 17, 2015 at 4:31 AM Thanks much James.. I am glad you like the title.. ~Olive ELoisa

Constance La France September 14, 2015 at 8:26 AM Olive, your poem is so beautifully penned, I love how you write from your heart and soul, well done 7 and I want to thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your Knock Us Down With Your Lines Contest, I am deeply honored. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 16, 2015 at 2:50 AM Constance, thank you so much of your wonderful encouraging comment.. =`) I always try my best to myself in every poem I am making... ~~Olive Eloisa

Arthur Vaso September 13, 2015 at 11:03 PM oh la la , j'adore la francais Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 16, 2015 at 2:35 AM thanks much~

Andrea Dietrich September 13, 2015 at 5:56 PM til the fish learns to fly. Now THAT will be a long long time, dearie, and I hope your prediction is true. What a sweet happy poem. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 15, 2015 at 4:37 AM Thanks much Andie, I am glad you saw this a happy poem.. =`) So long as we cling to God Almighty, I know all things are possible..~Olive ELoisa

Emile Pinet September 13, 2015 at 10:18 AM Your feelings leap out of your words and ignite the emotional fires alive within your verses. Emile. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 14, 2015 at 5:41 AM Emile I thank you for your kind comments.. I simply write what is it that ran to my heart and thoughts.... somehow, I am making a point that.. not only should my poem paint a picture but more it reflects a heart... =`)~Olive Eloisa