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From My Window

tall trees bow and sway in the howling wind and rain - a red hat flies past written 15th March for Constance's haiku contest

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/19/2019 10:17:00 PM

This is an excellent haiku with a great aha moment Jack. It is obvious you understand haiku. Congratulations on your deserving win that is first place for me! : )

Constance La France

Date: 3/18/2019 11:00:00 AM

Jack, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful haiku ~

Eve Roper

Date: 3/17/2019 6:47:00 PM

Great Haiku, Jack, congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2019 6:29:00 PM

Yours was one of my favorites. BAck with congrats , Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/17/2019 3:07:00 PM

- Great view from your window, Jack :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/16/2019 3:06:00 PM

Such imagery Jack - I see it all happening before me - very nicely penned my friend. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2019 7:01:00 PM

GREAT image of that flash of red in the midst of it all.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2019 4:31:00 PM

Ahh!! A little humor with the wind. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 3/15/2019 2:54:00 PM

I love the imagery and the movement it portrays, Jack. Have a nice weekend, my friend. // paul

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/15/2019 11:01:00 AM

Oh, I liked this! Love the juxtaposition! :)

Judy Ball

Date: 3/15/2019 10:35:00 AM

A really good one my friend. Nicely done. God Bless, JB

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/15/2019 10:19:00 AM

Cool line 3 twist Jack! Soup mail...

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/15/2019 9:42:00 AM

Like it! BG

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/15/2019 9:40:00 AM

Great imagery, Jack.