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From My Window

tall trees bow and sway
in the howling wind and rain -
a red hat flies past

written 15th March for Constance's haiku contest

Copyright © Jack Horne | Year Posted 2019

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Connie Marcum Wong

March 19, 2019 at 10:17 PM

This is an excellent haiku with a great aha moment Jack. It is obvious you understand haiku. Congratulations on your deserving win that is first place for me! : )

Constance La France

March 18, 2019 at 11:00 AM

Jack, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful haiku ~

March 17, 2019 at 6:47 PM

Great Haiku, Jack, congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*

Andrea Dietrich

March 17, 2019 at 6:29 PM

Yours was one of my favorites. BAck with congrats , Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 17, 2019 at 3:07 PM

- Great view from your window, Jack :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

March 16, 2019 at 3:06 PM

Such imagery Jack - I see it all happening before me - very nicely penned my friend. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

March 15, 2019 at 7:01 PM

GREAT image of that flash of red in the midst of it all.

March 15, 2019 at 4:31 PM

Ahh!! A little humor with the wind. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara

March 15, 2019 at 2:54 PM

I love the imagery and the movement it portrays, Jack. Have a nice weekend, my friend. // paul

March 15, 2019 at 11:01 AM

Oh, I liked this! Love the juxtaposition! :)

March 15, 2019 at 10:35 AM

A really good one my friend. Nicely done. God Bless, JB

James Marshall Goff

March 15, 2019 at 10:19 AM

Cool line 3 twist Jack! Soup mail...

Barbara Gorelick

March 15, 2019 at 9:42 AM

Like it! BG

March 15, 2019 at 9:40 AM

Great imagery, Jack.

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