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From My Diary: Sadness

July nineteenth, each year a single note, scribbled reminder, lest I should forget, 'Janet's Birthday today' was all I wrote although I've not missed sending a card yet. But then another line came on that day, unnwelcome visitor in icy blue, 'Anniversary Mother passed away' don't need to write it but each year I do. Why must this page be flavoured bittersweet, heartless conspiracy between these two, cruelly birth and death arrange to meet, the date now ruined by their rendezvous? This page may have a number and a name but destined now to never be the same. For contest 'From my diary', sponsor, Broken Wings November 3rd 2017

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Date: 11/12/2017 11:37:00 PM
That is a very emotional poem, you have expressed the sentiments so well.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/13/2017 6:35:00 AM
Thanks, Arthur, appreciate your visit. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/10/2017 6:46:00 PM
Oh my gosh, have I got much to ramble about! First, before I vanished for 7+ months (just returned), you were a vanished man. I've thought about ya, pictured perfection in all things for ya. Second, I relate to the sadness in your poem, but I also see spiritual poetry occurring on that date. Two sweet souls passing while on their ever continuing journey. I could cry and/or smile, I get both. Be well, ya hear? hugs ... CayCay (didn't you have some kind of name contest going?)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/13/2017 6:36:00 AM
Hi CayCay, glad you're well. Thanks for popping by, appreciate your comments. Will drop by yours shortly. Viv x
Date: 11/8/2017 7:03:00 PM
Congratulations Viv: Beautifully expressed. Best, Suz
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Date: 11/8/2017 5:31:00 PM
wow, Viv, this is one of the saddest of the sad. I sure hope this placed very high. Outstanding work and congratulations.
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Date: 11/8/2017 2:05:00 PM
This poem truly tugged at my heart. Congratulations on your second placement, first in my opinion, and it is going into my Faves Viv! : )
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Date: 11/8/2017 11:57:00 AM
Viv, congratulations on your win in my contest with this ever so sad page from your diary, well done !
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Date: 11/8/2017 9:27:00 AM
An excellent thought provoking pen, congratulations on your win :) xomo!
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Date: 11/8/2017 7:46:00 AM
This is well expressed Viv, congrats on a fine win.
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Date: 11/8/2017 2:50:00 AM
Bittersweet indeed Viv, I choose not to remember the date of the sad anniversaries. I just remember the people. Trust me, I feel the pain every day. A beautiful poem.
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Date: 11/7/2017 11:36:00 PM
Viv, congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/8/2017 1:01:00 AM
Thanks, Eve, just a shame I had a suitable subject for the contest. Viv x
Date: 11/4/2017 4:24:00 PM
Very nice poem Viv!:) Good luck in the contest.Nice seeing back in the site.Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In His light God bless you!:)D
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/8/2017 1:01:00 AM
Thanks Dorien, forgive my absence, been very busy. will drop by soon. Viv x
Date: 11/3/2017 6:55:00 PM
Great write, Viv. It is hard when dates take on such a sad meaning. Good luck in the contest.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/8/2017 1:01:00 AM
Thanks Agnes, appreciate you popping by. Viv x
Date: 11/3/2017 11:19:00 AM
aww Mr Viv this is such a bittersweet entry on any diary page, although some dates are ingrained in your brain forever (but i did get our anniversary wrong by 2 days lat year lol). Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/8/2017 1:02:00 AM
Thanks Jan, yes, I think I write it because some days I still don't believe it x

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