From Midnight Rain My Barren Mist

sodden vapors cling
drench my soul with thoughts of you
leaden in the night 



01/14/11
11:27 pm
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For SKAT's contest
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Sanders Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 4:12 PM
Congratz on being featured I know why to excellent poetry
Hamilton Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 4:44 AM
hi James congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles
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July 27, 2013 at 9:21 PM
James, Congratulations, on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Take care & Goodnight... -xox- *LINDA
Austin Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 10:13 AM
Love this - what I would call a - tender nightmare. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Calhoun Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 6:04 AM
Hi James - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC
Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 4:44 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fine work..I can just feel the scene..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 2:37 PM
sad, i wish you weren't sad BUT excellent senyru! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Situation Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 7:21 PM
congradulations on your win. T. H.
Ruebel Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 3:00 PM
Hello James, A very beautiful Haiku indeed. Good luck in the contest As Always, Shar
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 7:14 PM
I really loved yours, James. A BIG congratulaitons for this one. LUv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 2:15 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, James, Jimbo
Fraser Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 11:56 AM
Wonderful Haiku for Skat's contest James and deserved of it's win. Many congrats to you....:)
Muzzey Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 11:16 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful Haiku. Caryl
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January 17, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, Jimbo! Always, Annalise
George   Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 10:06 AM
A winner for sure, James. Lainie
Culverhouse Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 6:45 AM
beautiful haiku!! You've got talent my friend!
Sweetheart Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 5:39 AM
Congrats James on a fabulous win in the Dark Rain contest with this fantastic entry full of vibrancy ... enjoy your top tenner with luv..
Brown Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 5:32 AM
Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest James, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol
Falotico Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 3:52 AM
Excellent words form a wonderul win...congrats
Neels Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 3:39 AM
James, congratulations on your win in Irma's contest :)
Poet Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 2:25 AM
Wow!Excellent!Congrats James on your win!
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January 16, 2011 at 10:11 PM
James!! congratulations! ,on your awesome entry for the dark rain contest,..p.d.
Johnson Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 9:29 PM
They make the darkest night even darker. Congratulations James on your win. Love, Joyce
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January 16, 2011 at 9:23 PM
Congratulations, James !thank you so much for your Haiku. I had fun reading every dark rain entry~luv~SKAT
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January 16, 2011 at 4:59 PM
a piquant and well-scribed piece, james! best of winning wishes in the contest... grrreat stuff! :) nette
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