From Hills To Mills

Industry stole those splendid hills
By taking fields and building mills.
Down in each vale man's cauldrons brew
Spewing out soot and see-o-two.

But even worse was vile venom.
The days of acid rain had come
As brimstone coal made sulphur fume
That in the raincloud formed a plume.

And back-to-back by chimney stack
Defined the world in shades of black.
The jet, the soot, the anthracite.
From all black bright there shone midnight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 2:04 PM
Good one. Do mills use coal anymore? I know that maybe power plants do. Sara
Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 10:52 AM
It is good that most of the coal burning and I guess mining has gone. I don't know if the power we use now is any better though. Sara
Hargreaves Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 9:37 AM
Hi Sara. Many thanks for your comment. The mills no longer burn coal because the mills now have gone. Most coal burning has stopped in UK. Best wishes. Tony
Sands Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 12:10 PM
Well written Tony :)
Hargreaves Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 9:39 AM
Hello Heidi. Thank you for your comment. Take care. Tony.
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