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From Hills To Mills

Industry stole those splendid hills By taking fields and building mills. Down in each vale man's cauldrons brew Spewing out soot and see-o-two. But even worse was vile venom. The days of acid rain had come As brimstone coal made sulphur fume That in the raincloud formed a plume. And back-to-back by chimney stack Defined the world in shades of black. The jet, the soot, the anthracite. From all black bright there shone midnight.

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Date: 12/14/2020 2:04:00 PM
Good one. Do mills use coal anymore? I know that maybe power plants do. Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/16/2020 10:52:00 AM
It is good that most of the coal burning and I guess mining has gone. I don't know if the power we use now is any better though. Sara
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Tony Hargreaves
Date: 12/16/2020 9:37:00 AM
Hi Sara. Many thanks for your comment. The mills no longer burn coal because the mills now have gone. Most coal burning has stopped in UK. Best wishes. Tony
Date: 12/14/2020 12:10:00 PM
Well written Tony :)
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Tony Hargreaves
Date: 12/16/2020 9:39:00 AM
Hello Heidi. Thank you for your comment. Take care. Tony.

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