From Dark To Black

...inspired by 'Goodnight' by Seamus Heaney



From dark to black they staggered,
felt for familiar surfaces,
they groped, until the lantern flickered,
faint glow resurrecting shadows.

Cold and flaggy, floors uneven,
up and down they skittered
like two drunkards on a binge,
finding legs, orientation.

Gaslight blue-flamed 'neath the kettle,
blanket grabbed, the bed was ransacked,
tea was swallowed gratefully,
with a pinch the lamp gave up the ghost.

From dark to black, not even starlight
gave relief to weathered eyes,
huddled 'neath the self-same blanket,
wide-mouthed yawns and muffled sighs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Nance Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 7:08 AM
Exceptional descriptions Keith, "with a pinch the lamp gave up the ghost." "huddled 'neath the self-same blanket, wide-mouthed yawns and muffled sighs." those lines stuck out the most, I enjoyed this write. ::)
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February 23, 2016 at 11:33 AM
Thanks so much for your delightful review! I am most grateful... Best wishes, Keith
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