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From Dark To Black

...inspired by 'Goodnight' by Seamus Heaney From dark to black they staggered, felt for familiar surfaces, they groped, until the lantern flickered, faint glow resurrecting shadows. Cold and flaggy, floors uneven, up and down they skittered like two drunkards on a binge, finding legs, orientation. Gaslight blue-flamed 'neath the kettle, blanket grabbed, the bed was ransacked, tea was swallowed gratefully, with a twist the lamp gave up the ghost. From light to black, not even starlight gave relief to weathered eyes, huddled 'neath the self-same blanket, wide-mouthed yawns and muffled sighs.

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Date: 1/3/2011 3:14:00 PM
Ahh..this reminds of a camp we'd go to, for Thanksgiving. I suppose I felt the ghost of those days, with the flicker of the gas lamp. Nostogia gleaned from pleasant rememberances. I doubt there was a "weathered eye" in that place...they were too busy probing the darkness.:) Best to you, Keith! Mikki
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