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From Childood - a Chap Book By Dave Austin

PAL Pal was all waggles and wiggles loved to wrestle He could jump his backyard fence so easily To play with the children who loved him Perhaps the love given on both sides that summer was enough Perhaps I could forgive myself someday For calling Pal across the busy street to play But could I ever forget the thump Pal skidding his nose along the hot pitch street whining desperately Perhaps the love given on both sides would be enough Perhaps that love would be enough for one dog’s life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/15/2017 4:15:00 PM
CAme back to this one that is so wonderful of yours. Did you hear of the new movie coming end of this month? It's called A Dog's Purpose. You will love that movie if you go see it, I am sure.
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Daver Austin
Date: 1/18/2017 8:48:00 AM
I mean to see this movie. I hope it's very dark in the theater because I cry all the way through animal shows. Love, daver
Date: 10/29/2016 4:29:00 AM
Oh, you made me cry here Daver. Poignantly brilliant, but oh so sad! 7 : )
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Daver Austin
Date: 10/30/2016 10:28:00 AM
Thanks, Connie. Yes, I still tear when I remember that German shepherd. We used to wrestle every day. Love, Dave
Date: 8/23/2012 9:06:00 AM
Life love and loyalty eh'daver... he trusted you did pal..I know he would never blame you, one of the richest things you have is the knowing of him he; as he was so he still is, part of the universe, (take care Joe)
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Date: 7/17/2012 9:41:00 PM
yes, yes, here it is again. So poignant this is, Daver.
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Date: 7/17/2012 1:52:00 PM
Would have been traumatizing to see, Daver! Still, Pal would not feel as if he'd been forgotten. This creates a vivid scene, I can't say I'd enjoyed it...I can't erase Pal from my mind. So, this is an excellent write...you've certainly hit a string!:) Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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Date: 7/17/2012 1:44:00 PM
That is sooo sad Austin! I'm amazed with the grandiosity of your incredible write! I loved your poem! I'm saddened by what happened within the poem, but it is written so well! Wonderful write, Great Work!!
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