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From a Mountain's Peak

From a mountain's peak, to a very picturesque valley below, these cold and sprightly waters flow... watching the gyrfalcon cool off his beak. River, don't stop your flow anytime, let me admire how you glisten... running down the snowy inclines; hearing the croaking sound of a raven. Further down you plunge into ravines, and less forcelful than a waterfall, you splash on rocks and wildflowers... raring in the manner of a rascal. No vigilant eagles, or dozing marabous amid stalks, are found as you approach vast grasslands, but the ocean is very far and doubts arise; o river, keep on flowing towards those serene skies! From a mountain's peak with graceful glee, you gurgle in flowless rhythm without mistake, satisfying my dry palate in a dire state; o river, flow like the blood that sustains me! Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/11/2010 11:21:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Andrew.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/11/2010 12:31:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on your Double success in Raul and Laura recent contests.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/6/2010 12:05:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Andrew.Rgds Brian Perhaps you care to edit it for the pourposes of the contest criteria of 20 lines max
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Date: 1/5/2010 7:12:00 PM
Awesome! Very scenic and magical write. Good luck on the contest. Thanks for sharing and happy new year, Caroline.
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Date: 1/5/2010 2:01:00 PM
Hey, Andrew, I hope you entered this one into Brian's contest? Well-written, Great job! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/4/2010 8:19:00 PM
Some wonderful phrases in this piece. I think its going to be a winner. I really enjoyed it. Bg
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Date: 1/4/2010 7:50:00 PM
from majestic strength, this river flows! nice! Andrew! jimbo
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