Paula Goldsmith Poet Haiku

From a Dad Nk

the big hot sun  
work for one   
now for fun 
we can run 
yes my son 
you have won  
playtime is done 
 
 
let us go check today's weather                                                                   sky has a big feather                                                                                             no ~ a white cloud flying                                                                                             ground really drying                                                                                     drops of rain are crying                                                                                         flowers for the buying                                                                                             bouquet for you Heather                                                                           mom ~ son glad we are together 
 
 
Date Written:8/29/2022 

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Charlie New-KuContest Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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M. L. Kiser December 18, 2022 at 4:01 PM A lovely charlie-ku; wonderful piece. Paula Goldsmith December 30, 2022 at 10:53 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day writing away. Happy New Year 2023............

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri November 24, 2022 at 1:13 PM A sweet lovely poem , nicely depicting the sunny and cloudy. Kudos!! ^^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^^^^^ plz also read and comment my newest poem too Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:48 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me.....

Len Gasun November 5, 2022 at 9:00 PM A well-written poem my dear friend Paula. Belated congratulations on your win! How are you my dearest friend? Hope you're doing well always. Hugs..hugs.. Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:47 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me and for your congratulations.......................

Michael Tor October 23, 2022 at 2:31 PM We miss you Paula hope you are all right Dear. Been a while since you posted. Please come back when you are ready don't forget...Blessings. Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:47 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me.....

Sara Kendrick October 21, 2022 at 4:25 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go with this winner. Sara Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:47 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me and for your congratulations..............

Christuraj Alex October 19, 2022 at 9:38 AM Your poems on dad are very beautiful ones. This too. Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:47 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me and for your congratulations.......

Valsa George October 18, 2022 at 11:43 PM What has happened to you Paula... ! Hope you are fine. We miss you. My Soupmail doesn't function most of the time. So I make an open inquiry! Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:46 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me........................

Charles Messina October 18, 2022 at 3:24 PM I love this, Paula. "Lovely" You did this for very well. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:46 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me and for your congratulations........................

Linda Alice Fowler October 10, 2022 at 10:57 AM Where are you Paula? Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:46 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to

Anne-Lise Andresen September 23, 2022 at 1:30 PM - A great Charles Messina haiku, Paula - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:45 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me.....................

Beryl Edmonds September 11, 2022 at 5:38 PM Love your humorous write Paula, and that line “sky has a big feather” is very clever. Best wishes… Belle Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:45 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me.......

Bill Baker September 10, 2022 at 3:41 PM Fun read, Paula. Unusual form for the contest. Good luck! Bill Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:45 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me..........

Susan Lawrence September 5, 2022 at 9:19 PM Filled with nuance and fun Paula ! I agree with others- I love sky has a big feather. Blessings. Best of luck in the contest .‘Susan :) Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:45 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me.....

Heidi Sands September 5, 2022 at 5:53 AM Excellent writing Paula :) Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:45 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me........................

Michael Tor September 2, 2022 at 6:38 PM Paula this form you have done well with. A wonderful entry for Charlies Contest. Best wishes in the contest Dear and God bless you... Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:44 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me........................

David Kavanagh September 2, 2022 at 4:28 AM Paula I’ve just discovered to my horror I had you blocked somehow, I absolutely have never blocked any poets purposely on this site, this also happened before, the great Jan Allison was blocked on my page too, I will have to keep a check on this in case it happens again, your (new ku) above is perfect with superb rhyme and family playtime atmosphere, great one for the contest, cheers David Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:44 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me........................

Linda Alice Fowler August 30, 2022 at 8:25 AM So sweet Paula. I, like others, love the "...sky has a big feather..."! blessings my friend, Linda Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:44 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me........................

Panagiota Romios August 30, 2022 at 7:13 AM An Amazing write. I liked sky has a big feather a lot. Pangie Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:44 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me........................

Mike Gentile August 30, 2022 at 4:55 AM Interesting thoughts and imagery here Paula!,especially " Sky has a big feather"! Good Luck in the contest!! Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:44 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me........................

Harry Horsman August 29, 2022 at 5:52 PM Oh wow, need to check this out Paula, love the poetry. Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:44 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me........................

Kim Rodrigues August 29, 2022 at 3:42 PM Very nice, Paula! Paula Goldsmith December 15, 2022 at 1:43 PM Thank You, for reading/writing to me........................