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From a Dad Nk

the big hot sun work for one now for fun we can run yes my son you have won playtime is done let us go check today's weather sky has a big feather no ~ a white cloud flying ground really drying drops of rain are crying flowers for the buying bouquet for you Heather mom ~ son glad we are together Date Written:8/29/2022 2 Place Charlie New-KuContest Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/18/2022 4:01:00 PM

A lovely charlie-ku; wonderful piece.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/30/2022 10:53:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day writing away. Happy New Year 2023............

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 11/24/2022 1:13:00 PM

A sweet lovely poem , nicely depicting the sunny and cloudy. Kudos!! ^^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^^^^^ plz also read and comment my newest poem too

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:48:00 PM

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Len Gasun

Date: 11/5/2022 9:00:00 PM

A well-written poem my dear friend Paula. Belated congratulations on your win! How are you my dearest friend? Hope you're doing well always. Hugs..hugs..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:47:00 PM

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Michael Tor

Date: 10/23/2022 2:31:00 PM

We miss you Paula hope you are all right Dear. Been a while since you posted. Please come back when you are ready don't forget...Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:47:00 PM

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2022 4:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go with this winner. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:47:00 PM

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/19/2022 9:38:00 AM

Your poems on dad are very beautiful ones. This too. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:47:00 PM

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Valsa George

Date: 10/18/2022 11:43:00 PM

What has happened to you Paula... ! Hope you are fine. We miss you. My Soupmail doesn't function most of the time. So I make an open inquiry!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:46:00 PM

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Charles Messina

Date: 10/18/2022 3:24:00 PM

I love this, Paula. "Lovely" You did this for very well. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:46:00 PM

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/10/2022 10:57:00 AM

Where are you Paula?

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:46:00 PM

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/23/2022 1:30:00 PM

- A great Charles Messina haiku, Paula - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:45:00 PM

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/11/2022 5:38:00 PM

Love your humorous write Paula, and that line “sky has a big feather” is very clever. Best wishes… Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:45:00 PM

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/10/2022 3:41:00 PM

Fun read, Paula. Unusual form for the contest. Good luck! Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:45:00 PM

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Susan Lawrence

Date: 9/5/2022 9:19:00 PM

Filled with nuance and fun Paula ! I agree with others- I love sky has a big feather. Blessings. Best of luck in the contest .‘Susan :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:45:00 PM

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Heidi Sands

Date: 9/5/2022 5:53:00 AM

Excellent writing Paula :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:45:00 PM

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Michael Tor

Date: 9/2/2022 6:38:00 PM

Paula this form you have done well with. A wonderful entry for Charlies Contest. Best wishes in the contest Dear and God bless you...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:44:00 PM

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David Kavanagh

Date: 9/2/2022 4:28:00 AM

Paula I’ve just discovered to my horror I had you blocked somehow, I absolutely have never blocked any poets purposely on this site, this also happened before, the great Jan Allison was blocked on my page too, I will have to keep a check on this in case it happens again, your (new ku) above is perfect with superb rhyme and family playtime atmosphere, great one for the contest, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:44:00 PM

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/30/2022 8:25:00 AM

So sweet Paula. I, like others, love the "...sky has a big feather..."! blessings my friend, Linda

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:44:00 PM

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