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Frigidaire -

 
oh hello-
my name is frigidair   and I am
a (retro) refrigerator
  for food
I have been in this apartment
      since 1950

a nice kitchen   but I cannot move
    so not sure about 
the rest
I am tall as a person
and a bit fat
       a lovely creamy white
             with drawers
                 (and an egg compartment)                       
and of course a freezer

      I am restored     a restoration  
not quit an antique yet
                        but feeling my age
my father was general electric
and mother was pink
      my sister was turquoise

free standing     happily I hum
all day
    and all night      and sometimes I
clunk
    I look crooked     but that's the floor
              I seem to be going
                        downhill

inside me are good things
like meat and poultry      ice cream
   milk    eggs    vegetables        juice
fruit

please be careful with my door

oh     some of my shelves are lopsided
(well that's old age)
    and lets not talk about the cracks

but I still work
    and some say I am quite appealing
      I've aged well    in this heritage building
or at least that is what 
     I heard        (and the word vintage)

did I tell you     they restored me
    to be frost free
                      (they put me to sleep for that)
               the girl likes that about me
I like it when she caresses me
                           with a wet damp clothe
she is quite proud
                      of me

and I like this room    big and roomy
          and the window
looks out on a lovely garden
that's so nice
                  and the little things the girl has
on counters                   so pretty   (she is)
      she always puts some      flowers
by the sink      for me    oh how sweet 

    its really a good life     for a refrigerator
although     not sure how much time
                 I have left    
(no regrets)         and to all refrigerators
  let me say      keep cool     and plugged in

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September 10, 2015


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A. Sharma Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 1:06 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write broken!
A  Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 12:07 PM
Another sweet win... SKAT
Roper Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 5:31 PM
Broken Wing, congratulations on your win!!! Enjoyed reading
Haight Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 3:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win, Broken. Loved reading it again! Hugs, Sandra
Cwiak Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 10:56 AM
Your memories are so subtle in this that by letting the refrigerator speak for you, it gives a great picture of the way things were. Great job and congratulations on the win.
Richards Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 10:07 AM
Such great personalization, Constance !! I loved your take on this challenge. So cute!!
Godwin Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 9:09 AM
Congratulations - well done ... CayCay
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 4:57 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx
Ryerson Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 5:15 PM
I'm a bit jealous Constance...I'm probably somewhere close to her age and nobody calls ME 'vintage' (Just old fool) AND nobody's 'restored' me yet either (I wanna be frost free too) LOVE the part about having to put her to sleep...Hilarious!! You got a winner here - Tim
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2015 at 6:19 PM
amazing personification poem, Constance. Simply beautiful. Let's hope she goes another 50 more years!!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 8:48 AM
I love those old refrigerators. You did this so well. I expect this will do very well in the contest Constance.
Peranteau Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 7:56 AM
I certainly recall that exact fridge dear poet, and to bring it to life was insanely creative! Thanx for the memories Constance...much love, james
Muideen Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 6:40 PM
A great write you painted BW. I love the flow of your piece it is extreme excellence and beautiful.......love.......A.M.
Allison Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 5:15 PM
Very clever personification Broken Wings - we both have the same idea of being caressed with a cloth lol great minds think alike :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Horne Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 3:39 PM
love this clever write, my friend. Hope you & the kitties are doing well x
Haight Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 8:14 AM
This is great, Broken! I love the personification of the retro refrig! We have a 1940's Philco in our bar that is still working and in great condition. It's a conversation piece for sure! Good luck in the contest -- I am sure this will do really well. Hugs, Sandra
Bare Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 7:43 AM
Interesting take on a not-so-interesting theme. I like it.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 2:12 AM
Brilliant take on the theme with this very lovely personification write broken! Gl in contest!
Tor Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 1:11 AM
Loved your personifications. Witty write. Really enjoyed.
Mutindi Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 12:10 AM
Another beautiful personification...all the best in the contest Broken wings!
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