Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Ballad

Fries and Man

Crunchy golden brown potatoes
Cut unevenly into strips sticks
One maybe half, one and two inches long
Best eaten after freshly fried

So thus us, creations of God
Unequal to wit, might and talents
Yet, daily equip in battle of growing
Not on failing but succeeding

The fries eaten plain or flavored
So is man simple and favored
The fries a fine finger food
So is man by nature is born good

Either served on plate or pouch
Us humans ready to serve and touch
Sometimes bitten bit or whole
Us humans molded clever or fool

by: olive_eloi
10:07am
01/19/2014

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James Fraser November 24, 2014 at 12:11 PM Wisdom, fries and man, very interesting take Olive, James :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 27, 2014 at 3:08 AM somehow sometimes each and every situations we are in or simply the things around us remind us of life.. :)

Michael Byte January 20, 2014 at 3:29 AM Like the way you switched it around in the verses. Very good my friend keep up good work. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 11, 2014 at 2:36 PM :) thanks for the support you have been one of my inspirations here.. :)