Get Your Premium Membership

Fries and Man

Crunchy golden brown potatoes Cut unevenly into strips sticks One maybe half, one and two inches long Best eaten after freshly fried So thus us, creations of God Unequal to wit, might and talents Yet, daily equip in battle of growing Not on failing but succeeding The fries eaten plain or flavored So is man simple and favored The fries a fine finger food So is man by nature is born good Either served on plate or pouch Us humans ready to serve and touch Sometimes bitten bit or whole Us humans molded clever or fool by: olive_eloi 10:07am 01/19/2014 ------------------»»»»

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/24/2014 12:11:00 PM
Wisdom, fries and man, very interesting take Olive, James :)
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/27/2014 3:08:00 AM
somehow sometimes each and every situations we are in or simply the things around us remind us of life.. :)
Date: 1/20/2014 3:29:00 AM
Like the way you switched it around in the verses. Very good my friend keep up good work.
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/11/2014 2:36:00 PM
:) thanks for the support you have been one of my inspirations here.. :)

Book: Shattered Sighs