Notes About The Poem

Friendship built on sand

thought i'd stand by you
while you lied and cheated

you thought i'd watch
and help along the way

well you thought wrong
i want no part of it



AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 4:30 PM
strong words filled with conviction. Liked it
Gauthier Avatar
July 22, 2025 at 10:35 PM
Thank you very much, Sara ~
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