Friendship 1

Friendship

F orget-me-nots start blooming in the vales
R oses, yellow,  grow  to withstand small gales
I dyllic is the  feel that it births in friends
E ncouragement and joy should be its ends
N ights turn serenely cool with friendship thoughts
D ays too  should become joyous and less hot
S ensuous  or even sensual could turn this bond
H appiness for all , its true sine-qua-non
I ntrospect often, navigating this ship
P eace , it engenders, during times of hardships.

@ 20 Apr 2013

For Becca's 'What a Friend really is'

Form: Acrostic/couplet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ayala Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 12:44 AM
Beautiful write! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Regards, Kika
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 5:10 PM
very nice acrostic in couplet form, Jag. Congrats on the winners' list.,
Mehta Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 5:46 AM
Lovely write on friendship, Jagat. congrats on the win
A   Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 6:18 PM
Jag, Congratulations!!! Enjoy your winning poem, I had tons of fun, going over the winning poems. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Things That Suck" Featuring Andrea's awesome title and poem, if you like. Always ~LINDA~
A   Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 6:32 PM
JAG, CONGRATULATIONS... friendship can be a very sweet feeling.. love your meaning.... :-) *LINDA
Arowolo Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 4:59 PM
Lovely and Unique piece.Nice presentation,Jag...Congrats on your win....
Oyewole Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 10:49 PM
Big Congrats Jag on your Win~A.O
Jones Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 9:37 PM
What a cool entry Jag...congratulations
Johnson Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 8:07 PM
A lovely acrostic. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Gasun Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 2:01 AM
Wow! A very beautiful and perfect acrostic for friendship my dear friend Jag. So love it! This is a winner for sure. Good luck always! Thank you so much for sharing and your warm congratulatory comments! Have a great weekend! love and hugs, Leonora
Manassian Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 10:51 PM
This is lovely, Jag. Quite different from how I thought you'd weave this acrostic. That's what makes it special. Thanks for the visits.
Jones Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 8:28 PM
Jag...this is awesome......love your form....
Puddifoot Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 2:35 PM
line 7 is intriguing...friends or lovers?...
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