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Friendship 1

Friendship F orget-me-nots start blooming in the vales R oses, yellow, grow to withstand small gales I dyllic is the feel that it births in friends E ncouragement and joy should be its ends N ights turn serenely cool with friendship thoughts D ays too should become joyous and less hot S ensuous or even sensual could turn this bond H appiness for all , its true sine-qua-non I ntrospect often, navigating this ship P eace , it engenders, during times of hardships. @ 20 Apr 2013 For Becca's 'What a Friend really is' Form: Acrostic/couplet

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Date: 8/20/2014 12:44:00 AM
Beautiful write! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Regards, Kika
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Date: 8/19/2014 5:10:00 PM
very nice acrostic in couplet form, Jag. Congrats on the winners' list.,
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Date: 8/19/2014 5:46:00 AM
Lovely write on friendship, Jagat. congrats on the win
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Date: 8/18/2014 6:18:00 PM
Jag, Congratulations!!! Enjoy your winning poem, I had tons of fun, going over the winning poems. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Things That Suck" Featuring Andrea's awesome title and poem, if you like. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/1/2013 6:32:00 PM
JAG, CONGRATULATIONS... friendship can be a very sweet feeling.. love your meaning.... :-) *LINDA
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Date: 4/30/2013 4:59:00 PM
Lovely and Unique piece.Nice presentation,Jag...Congrats on your win....
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Date: 4/29/2013 10:49:00 PM
Big Congrats Jag on your Win~A.O
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Date: 4/29/2013 9:37:00 PM
What a cool entry Jag...congratulations
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Date: 4/29/2013 8:07:00 PM
A lovely acrostic. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/21/2013 2:01:00 AM
Wow! A very beautiful and perfect acrostic for friendship my dear friend Jag. So love it! This is a winner for sure. Good luck always! Thank you so much for sharing and your warm congratulatory comments! Have a great weekend! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 4/20/2013 10:51:00 PM
This is lovely, Jag. Quite different from how I thought you'd weave this acrostic. That's what makes it special. Thanks for the visits.
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Date: 4/20/2013 8:28:00 PM
Jag...this is awesome......love your form....
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Date: 4/20/2013 2:35:00 PM
line 7 is intriguing...friends or lovers?...
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