Friends, Haven'T You Any Fish

The best poetry stays silent and deep
It cries for attention below still waters
Each one melting into oceans weeping

I still fish poorly in infinity’s pool
With no reward that satisfies
How the fishees goad me cruelly

Titles of poems swim beneath
Above this captain surrendering
Then fragments of stanzas bequeath

I take in my morning catch 
Fillet and debone them into lines
Till the blade parse thoughts

My unskilled lines always snap
But the hours in between recede
Tugging fruitlessly my line's gaps

The more I go fishing with a net
Tempting manic thoughts gather
Inspire me as Jesus did to Peter

The best poetry needs no hook
Leave the white whale port side
Cast starboard into faith’s pools 

But I doubt the Lord’s mastery
Bereft without empty nets or baits
I dive without wit into the mystery

If I pull up a catch each dour day 
Perhaps I will tire of idle fishing
Careless of a spare haul turning gray

I’ll hang tunas and shrimps on a board
Hoping not to care if poems are unsold
Catching and releasing every word

Becoming a fine fishmonger fishing his soul


** Sorry for the deluge of poems. I'm trying to write a poem a day this month just to hammer down each poem straighter. I'm obsessive about getting it just right and hating nails that stick out.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 5/3/2023 12:47:00 PM
that is a super goal for you. I do the same but I do all of my week's poems usually in just one day. On the weekend when I have the time to write. Excellent metaphor-ing!
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