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Friendless

Always misunderstood,
Blaming others not at fault,
Challenging  wisdom,
Desperately,  trying to
Eliminate the need to be loved

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2010 12:52:00 PM

congrats. I am just now seeing these. I am confused becuase there seem to be three different ways to do these, and your is the easiest way. haha. Good little poem.Luv, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/4/2010 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Deborah's contest Virginia. Love,Carol

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/3/2010 12:57:00 PM

this is a great poem and i am sure u already know everybody needs to be love, i guess thats why you put desperately trying part eh? good write. =)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/3/2010 3:57:00 AM

Congratulations Virginia, on your Honorable Mention in Deborah Guzzi’s, “Do You Know Your ABC’s?” contest with this heartfelt, sad poem. It's easy to see why you placed. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

James Fraser

Date: 2/2/2010 1:07:00 PM

Many congratulations on your win in Deborah's fine contest Virginia >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/1/2010 6:52:00 PM

Congrats Virginia on your winning poem in the ABC contest.. wonderful win for a well written write... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/31/2010 2:34:00 PM

Powerful write Virginia.. good luck if u entered in the contest... your title compliments the poem's content.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2010 3:35:00 AM

Those are definitely some traits that will eliminate friendship and family. Neat poem. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/30/2010 8:18:00 AM

This ABC poem certainly expresses a feeling or mood, Virginia. Good work.and good luck! -Robert

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/30/2010 8:15:00 AM

beetlemania "all you need is love, all you need is love, all you need is love love. love is all you need. " john

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/30/2010 5:35:00 AM

wow, sounds like someone i use to know... what a pleasant read and enjoy your weekend.:)

Brian Strand

Date: 1/30/2010 12:58:00 AM

So true Virginia.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian.

Margaret Foster

Date: 1/29/2010 10:42:00 PM

Sounds a bit like my granddaughter a few years back, happily she now admits she needs her family... well written. thanks for your kind words..Margaret

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2010 6:53:00 PM

Wow, that is a very good definition for "friendless" with your wise ABC here. Good luck if this is one for the contest. Luv, Andrea

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 1/29/2010 12:50:00 PM

Thought provoking write Virginia, thanks for the comment Daniel

Michael Harman

Date: 1/29/2010 12:48:00 PM

Eliminate the need to be loved,,,, hmm, i like that,,, nice,,,I dont know what i think of it but,, i felt it,,,