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Friendless

Always misunderstood,
Blaming others not at fault,
Challenging  wisdom,
Desperately,  trying to
Eliminate the need to be loved

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Andrea Dietrich

February 23, 2010 at 12:52 PM

congrats. I am just now seeing these. I am confused becuase there seem to be three different ways to do these, and your is the easiest way. haha. Good little poem.Luv, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 4, 2010 at 6:17 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Deborah's contest Virginia. Love,Carol

Joanna Smith

February 3, 2010 at 12:57 PM

this is a great poem and i am sure u already know everybody needs to be love, i guess thats why you put desperately trying part eh? good write. =)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 3, 2010 at 3:57 AM

Congratulations Virginia, on your Honorable Mention in Deborah Guzzi’s, “Do You Know Your ABC’s?” contest with this heartfelt, sad poem. It's easy to see why you placed. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

James Fraser

February 2, 2010 at 1:07 PM

Many congratulations on your win in Deborah's fine contest Virginia >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 1, 2010 at 6:52 PM

Congrats Virginia on your winning poem in the ABC contest.. wonderful win for a well written write... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 31, 2010 at 2:34 PM

Powerful write Virginia.. good luck if u entered in the contest... your title compliments the poem's content.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Sara Kendrick

January 31, 2010 at 3:35 AM

Those are definitely some traits that will eliminate friendship and family. Neat poem. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Robert A. Dufresne

January 30, 2010 at 8:18 AM

This ABC poem certainly expresses a feeling or mood, Virginia. Good work.and good luck! -Robert

John Loving Iii

January 30, 2010 at 8:15 AM

beetlemania "all you need is love, all you need is love, all you need is love love. love is all you need. " john

Derrick Burton

January 30, 2010 at 5:35 AM

wow, sounds like someone i use to know... what a pleasant read and enjoy your weekend.:)

Brian Strand

January 30, 2010 at 12:58 AM

So true Virginia.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian.

Margaret Foster

January 29, 2010 at 10:42 PM

Sounds a bit like my granddaughter a few years back, happily she now admits she needs her family... well written. thanks for your kind words..Margaret