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9/6/13
For the  Women who Paint Contest Series: FRIDA KAHLO in Free verse contest
Sept. 5, 2021 for ''H'' Contest, New Or Old Poems Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

Aug 1, 2025 entered in Mark Toney's '2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 1' Contest

Five excruciating months I’ve spent inside this corset made of steel. It binds the soul beneath my broken column. See me standing here naked before this bleak and arid landscape, fissured like the furrows of this barren yellow plain on which a child to call my own will never play. See my flesh impaled by nails. From head to toe they travel down my body. See the largest nail. It pricks that part of me from whence my love flowed freely for the one man I adored. . . See my chest, which houses the heart that he has pierced again and again and again. See my tears, white against my sullen face. Only you who know true heartbreak can feel the anguish painted in my eyes. My body I laid bare to help you see inside me, but how can someone paint the sorrowed soul? Five excruciating months I’ve spent inside this corset made of steel. It’s only an extension of my entire life’s ordeal. Though it’s meant to heal me, it is but a constant cruel reminder that heartbreak is my companion Ever more.

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Date: 8/7/2025 8:04:00 PM
Andrea, this is a potent work, I have read it several times and the feelings come through with amazing power and clarity. Extremely well done. Congratulations on the win, it is well deserved. Ron
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/7/2025 8:09:00 PM
Thanks so much. I don't know how I ever created this one since my free verse style is usually not strong. Maybe the movie of her life really inspired me
Date: 8/5/2025 11:55:00 PM
A big congratulations for the first place podium finish.
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Date: 8/3/2025 2:55:00 PM
You did it, babe. I wholeheartedly congratulate you! Love ... CayCay
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/4/2025 2:11:00 AM
Thanks. I did not even know there was a line limit. I nearly had gone over it!!
Date: 8/3/2025 7:37:00 AM
Dear Andrea, congratulations for your golden trophy win in Mark's contest with this stunning poem capturing the angst, physical/emotional passion and suffering of an extraordinary woman and artist. Amazing and moving imagery! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/4/2025 2:12:00 AM
Thanks, Susan
Date: 8/3/2025 6:57:00 AM
This is an excellent poem, so deep and touching . Indeed worthy of the first placement. Congratulations on your trophy win... dear Andrea. Wish you the very best in the ensuing races.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/4/2025 2:13:00 AM
Thanks so much. I find these marathons so stressful. I am shocked to have gotten a trophy.
Date: 8/3/2025 3:10:00 AM
What a fabulous write on behalf of Frida, Andrea dear, well deserving of the trophy win.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/4/2025 2:13:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 8/3/2025 12:04:00 AM
Well done by winning the first leg in Mark's marathon, Andrea. It is a rather passionate poem - one can't help but feel the emotions welling up in one's chest upon reading it.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/4/2025 2:13:00 AM
Thanks, Suzette
Date: 8/2/2025 11:56:00 PM
Andrea, welcome back to the track! Congratulations on your first-place finish on Mile 1 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 2 has already started.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/4/2025 1:35:00 AM
Wow. I am shocked to get a first place. This is one of the poems I truly felt I had written in free verse style, so difficult for me. Maybe I was just really inspired by the movie of this woman's life. Thanks so much for the trophy
Date: 9/9/2021 5:53:00 AM
I knew this was Frida as I read of her corseted pain! You wrote a great one, sister! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/9/2021 4:43:00 AM
What a clever talented verse from a great poetess... Thanks for sharing this dear Ria... so that I got to read this masterpiece of yours that you wrote long back... From the comments given below years ago, I found out this was written for a painting given... for a previous contest... So expressive of the pain and heartbreak a woman experienced... Congrats on your Top win sweet friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/8/2021 11:45:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, Your well-written poem expresses “heartbreak” in a profound way. Congratulations on your top win; it was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/8/2021 9:23:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my "H" Contest, New or Old with your beautiful poem ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/8/2021 8:23:00 PM
fissured like the furrows of this barren yellow plain on which a child to call my own will never play. - Poignant lines. Beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/8/2021 4:37:00 PM
Very emotive! You are great in capturing moments in time..A brilliant write!!
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Date: 9/8/2021 3:34:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea. A poignant piece of writing - expressing pain and heartbreak - touches heart. Wonderful images and structure, Dear Poet. To my faves. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 9/8/2021 3:16:00 PM
Wonderful writing. So intriguing and heartbreaking. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 11/7/2013 11:01:00 PM
Andrea, wow, you caught the feeling and the image both in this poem and its structure, well done, congratulations on your win
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Date: 11/7/2013 8:10:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Exceptional piece of work. Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 11/7/2013 12:23:00 PM
Andrea, , brilliant imagery... nice win * HUGS & LOVE <3 ~SKAT~ :)
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Date: 10/17/2013 4:21:00 PM
Oh my the pain of it all. Nicely described on this one Andrea. I feel it. love phyl
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Date: 9/18/2013 8:03:00 AM
oh my god.. i can feel the pain!
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Date: 9/14/2013 8:17:00 PM
That's another capture of art inspiring art Petal, I think Frida would approve. Take care, Richard
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Date: 9/12/2013 10:39:00 AM
I'd like to see you write a couple more about her amazing paintings. She had a profound style. I enjoyed your illiteration of it. Peace. :)
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Date: 9/9/2013 4:09:00 AM
EXCELLENT PIECE I ENJOYED
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Date: 9/8/2013 6:26:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading my verses. Light & Love
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