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Fretting Freak

Fretting
Freak
Pet 
this wreck.
Iron 
his wrinkled insanity.
Crushed,crumbled emotions
Inject love.
Fretting 
Freak
Increase his dosage.
Ahh...
Don`t you feel better now?

lifelovefree verse

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 30, 2009 at 6:24 PM

Enjoyed this one Robin.. interesting words put together in a neat poem ... luv your title too.. thankxxx for reading and commenting on my poetry tonight also.. HNY 2010 with blessings... luv... and prosperity... Linda-Marie..

Andrea Dietrich

December 30, 2009 at 8:29 AM

Yes, I thought also that was an interesting line,: "iron his wrinkled insanity"Someone thought this was a pet, but I thought it was a person. Who is Fretting freak?

Constance La France

December 28, 2009 at 5:23 PM

A wonder flow of words.. I love the lines "Iron .. his wrinkled insanity" and thanks for your comment on my poem, Into the Future...

S. Michael Fuller

December 26, 2009 at 6:09 PM

Hey Robin, Thanks for your kind comments. This is a great little poem. When I feel this way, it usually means I need to quit breaking the pill in half and take the whole thing :) Keep it rolling! Mike

James Fraser

December 26, 2009 at 8:05 AM

Kool verse Robin, could do with a dose of this >> Merry Christmas to you and your family >> James,xx

Sara Kendrick

November 30, 2009 at 12:40 PM

Most all pets and people respond very well to the injection of love. Nicely done in a peom. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

November 10, 2009 at 9:16 PM

The dosage Of Love.Can you share..Can i pass it on?excellent Robin--Charma

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 10, 2009 at 4:44 AM

I had a beautiful weekend in Michigan but.....I am so happy to be back here at the Soup reading your wonderful Poetry. Thank you for sharing Robin. Love, Carol

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