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Fretting Freak

Fretting
Freak
Pet 
this wreck.
Iron 
his wrinkled insanity.
Crushed,crumbled emotions
Inject love.
Fretting 
Freak
Increase his dosage.
Ahh...
Don`t you feel better now?

Copyright © Robin Maughan | Year Posted 2009

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/30/2009 6:24:00 PM Enjoyed this one Robin.. interesting words put together in a neat poem ... luv your title too.. thankxxx for reading and commenting on my poetry tonight also.. HNY 2010 with blessings... luv... and prosperity... Linda-Marie.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/30/2009 8:29:00 AM Yes, I thought also that was an interesting line,: "iron his wrinkled insanity"Someone thought this was a pet, but I thought it was a person. Who is Fretting freak? Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 12/28/2009 5:23:00 PM A wonder flow of words.. I love the lines "Iron .. his wrinkled insanity" and thanks for your comment on my poem, Into the Future... Login to Reply

S. Michael Fuller Date: 12/26/2009 6:09:00 PM Hey Robin, Thanks for your kind comments. This is a great little poem. When I feel this way, it usually means I need to quit breaking the pill in half and take the whole thing :) Keep it rolling! Mike Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 12/26/2009 8:05:00 AM Kool verse Robin, could do with a dose of this >> Merry Christmas to you and your family >> James,xx Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/30/2009 12:40:00 PM Most all pets and people respond very well to the injection of love. Nicely done in a peom. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/10/2009 9:16:00 PM The dosage Of Love.Can you share..Can i pass it on?excellent Robin--Charma Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/10/2009 4:44:00 AM I had a beautiful weekend in Michigan but.....I am so happy to be back here at the Soup reading your wonderful Poetry. Thank you for sharing Robin. Love, Carol Login to Reply