Fresh Peaches

Broken fruit stacked forward,
tender, lip-soft skins scuffed
among her unspoiled sisters.

Lonely is the unripe peach
turning her sun-side out, beckoning,
longing to be washed and tasted—
ignorant of her own green bitterness.

They always reach past the imperfect.

But for the fruit,
the reaching stops.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Heck Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 5:27 AM
Rickie - Congratulations on your 3 poems making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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November 1, 2008 at 7:03 PM
Rackie - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
Brown Avatar
October 28, 2008 at 10:21 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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October 26, 2008 at 4:36 PM
This is fantastic, Rickie and a well-deserved selection for the semi-finals in the PoetrySoup contest where you have THREE (!!) writes chosen. WOW ... good luck to you and I hope to read more of your writes soon!!
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2008 at 6:40 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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September 24, 2008 at 6:31 AM
Congratulations Rickie on the refeaturing of "Fresh Peaches." Vince
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September 22, 2008 at 6:19 AM
Congratulations Rickie on your enjoyable peachy poem being featured once again! Love, Shar
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July 9, 2008 at 7:36 PM
Nice Rickie, I always like to read your poetry.
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July 9, 2008 at 11:31 AM
Interesting perspective in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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July 9, 2008 at 8:49 AM
Hello Rickie Congrats on this darling feature write this week! Love peaches! Enjoyed much. Love Light Truth Patricia
Brown Avatar
July 9, 2008 at 4:19 AM
Rickie, congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
July 8, 2008 at 9:15 AM
Congrats on having fresh peaches featured this week
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July 7, 2008 at 7:53 AM
Congratulations Rickie on "Fresh Peaches" being featured. Now I'll feel guilty when I reach wy in the back for the fresh bread. Have a great day! Vince
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July 6, 2008 at 7:09 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Wonderful insight. Well done. Regards Heidie
Winter Avatar
July 6, 2008 at 6:08 PM
Congratulations Rickie on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Truly enjoyed. Love, Shar
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