Fresh New Baby

A fresh new baby, completely enamoring the entire family upon arrival,
Passed around, and oohed about, loved instantly and completely.
Her little eyes blinking around, fearful of the bright lights and weird sounds.
Wanting only her mother and father, as it was their voices she had known in the safety of darkness.
Cuddled and consoled, not by the old women wearing too much perfume and scratchy jewelry,
Who were fighting over their newborn grandchild, arguing about which side she looked like,
But by her own unadorned mother, pushing the strangers out of her room, so she could have her child back.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Bauer Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 6:36 PM
you've captured this perfectly, caren!
Mcferran Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 12:46 AM
Love this! And the part about "fighting over their newborn grandchild, arguing about which side she looked like" made me laugh! (So true-to-life...)
Mcferran Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 10:45 PM
Very true. How sad that people so readily attach all these expectations (for them to be "like" someone else)!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 7:21 AM
All newborns are beautiful in their own way but I think the only person they look like is themselves.
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