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You're the part of the world I was never shown A place where the pot hits your lungs in the most pleasurable of ways. What we do is illegal, but I've never felt so dangerously free. Staying awake with the stars, sharing our deepest thoughts with their non-existent brains. I feel you in unimaginable ways. Every illegal moment feels alive; a beating heart caressed by my brittle ribcage.

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Date: 12/15/2016 1:16:00 PM
Funny how illegal always seems to feel so good inside. This was very cool Tricia.
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Tricia Campese
Date: 12/15/2016 3:57:00 PM
Thank you, again!!
Date: 12/15/2016 9:24:00 AM
Well first of all I thank you for reading my poem,the girl I briefly today and I thank you for your comment,I just read three of your poems and dug them all! Simplicity is a gift ,I believe poetry should be understood not simply by the few but by the masses,keep making poetry accessible,and you will make poets.p.s.I read the first 3 poems in your listing and will read more.
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Tricia Campese
Date: 12/15/2016 10:46:00 AM
No problem! And thank you, I appreciate that so much

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