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Fresh lake drifts chastely to mirror waves of our time’s buoyant rides… and grief Writing Challenge 1, May 2019 – Cinqku For Dear Heart’s Contest 5/7/2019

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/7/2019 2:52:00 PM

Hello Nette, I love a glass lake. so beautiful, so calm. even better with a lovely sunset. have a nice day my friend.

Alkas Poetry

Date: 5/17/2019 5:36:00 AM

THE MEMORIES REST IN OUR MINDS BECAUSE WERE ONLY IMPRESSIONS IN THE WATER...BUT IMPRESSIONS ARE ALL THE POETS HAVE... CONGRATS NETTE, ALKAS.

Constance La France

Date: 5/14/2019 10:02:00 AM

Nette congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautifully penned piece and I love the image too!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/14/2019 6:01:00 AM

Congratulations nette. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/14/2019 3:26:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2019 6:29:00 PM

very well crafted cinkqu , Nette. Congrats in the contest.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/10/2019 3:21:00 PM

Serene and wistful, with a dark undercurrent - great entry for the contest, nette!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/10/2019 1:35:00 PM

Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Enjoyed reading your work for the contest. Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent there reading and commenting. Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 5/10/2019 8:47:00 AM

Your lake mirrors the good and bad times, Nette. Beautiful. ~ Have a lovely weekend. Hugs // paul

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/9/2019 8:48:00 PM

The tension in the lines reflecting the tension midst the placidity of the water and the pull of the current. Perfectly penned, nette. It's a winner! Guaranteed! :) gw

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/8/2019 6:35:00 PM

Beautiful Nette, love the imagery and mood!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/8/2019 12:19:00 PM

Well written.nette. Soup mail. Tom

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/8/2019 9:45:00 AM

I forecast another win for certain Nette - you have absolutely captured the mood in the pic. so eloquently written, with intense creativity! Hugs, Jen

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2019 3:09:00 AM

- Lovely written, Nette - Winner wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)