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Fresh Lake

Fresh lake
drifts chastely
to mirror waves
of our time’s buoyant rides…
and grief



Writing Challenge 1, May 2019 – Cinqku
For Dear Heart’s Contest   5/7/2019

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Darlene De Beaulieu

July 7, 2019 at 2:52 PM

Hello Nette, I love a glass lake. so beautiful, so calm. even better with a lovely sunset. have a nice day my friend.

Alkas Poetry

May 17, 2019 at 5:36 AM

THE MEMORIES REST IN OUR MINDS BECAUSE WERE ONLY IMPRESSIONS IN THE WATER...BUT IMPRESSIONS ARE ALL THE POETS HAVE... CONGRATS NETTE, ALKAS.

Constance La France

May 14, 2019 at 10:02 AM

Nette congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautifully penned piece and I love the image too!

Tom Cunningham

May 14, 2019 at 6:01 AM

Congratulations nette. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 14, 2019 at 3:26 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest :)

Andrea Dietrich

May 13, 2019 at 6:29 PM

very well crafted cinkqu , Nette. Congrats in the contest.

Michelle Faulkner

May 10, 2019 at 3:21 PM

Serene and wistful, with a dark undercurrent - great entry for the contest, nette!

Sara Kendrick

May 10, 2019 at 1:35 PM

Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Enjoyed reading your work for the contest. Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent there reading and commenting. Sara

Paul Callus

May 10, 2019 at 8:47 AM

Your lake mirrors the good and bad times, Nette. Beautiful. ~ Have a lovely weekend. Hugs // paul

Gershon Wolf

May 9, 2019 at 8:48 PM

The tension in the lines reflecting the tension midst the placidity of the water and the pull of the current. Perfectly penned, nette. It's a winner! Guaranteed! :) gw

Tania Kitchin

May 8, 2019 at 6:35 PM

Beautiful Nette, love the imagery and mood!

Tom Cunningham

May 8, 2019 at 12:19 PM

Well written.nette. Soup mail. Tom

Jennifer Proxenos

May 8, 2019 at 9:45 AM

I forecast another win for certain Nette - you have absolutely captured the mood in the pic. so eloquently written, with intense creativity! Hugs, Jen