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Fresh Lake

Fresh lake
drifts chastely
to mirror waves
of our time’s buoyant rides…
and grief



Writing Challenge 1, May 2019 – Cinqku
For Dear Heart’s Contest   5/7/2019

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2019

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 7/7/2019 2:52:00 PM Hello Nette, I love a glass lake. so beautiful, so calm. even better with a lovely sunset. have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply

Alkas Poetry Date: 5/17/2019 5:36:00 AM THE MEMORIES REST IN OUR MINDS BECAUSE WERE ONLY IMPRESSIONS IN THE WATER...BUT IMPRESSIONS ARE ALL THE POETS HAVE... CONGRATS NETTE, ALKAS. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 5/14/2019 10:02:00 AM Nette congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this beautifully penned piece and I love the image too! Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/14/2019 6:01:00 AM Congratulations nette. Tom Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/14/2019 3:26:00 AM - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/13/2019 6:29:00 PM very well crafted cinkqu , Nette. Congrats in the contest. Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 5/10/2019 3:21:00 PM Serene and wistful, with a dark undercurrent - great entry for the contest, nette! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/10/2019 1:35:00 PM Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Enjoyed reading your work for the contest. Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent there reading and commenting. Sara Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 5/10/2019 8:47:00 AM Your lake mirrors the good and bad times, Nette. Beautiful. ~ Have a lovely weekend. Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 5/9/2019 8:48:00 PM The tension in the lines reflecting the tension midst the placidity of the water and the pull of the current. Perfectly penned, nette. It's a winner! Guaranteed! :) gw Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 5/8/2019 6:35:00 PM Beautiful Nette, love the imagery and mood! Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/8/2019 12:19:00 PM Well written.nette. Soup mail. Tom Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 5/8/2019 9:45:00 AM I forecast another win for certain Nette - you have absolutely captured the mood in the pic. so eloquently written, with intense creativity! Hugs, Jen Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/8/2019 3:09:00 AM - Lovely written, Nette - Winner wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 5/7/2019 8:32:00 PM Oh, so beautiful, Nette, good for a win.. Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Carl Fraser Date: 5/7/2019 8:06:00 PM Hi Nette, oh what those mirrored waves can wash away. I lived this almost daily and can truly relate. Very nicely done. Blessings, Carl Login to Reply

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. Date: 5/7/2019 7:04:00 PM you tied together skillfully Login to Reply

Hilo Poet Date: 5/7/2019 5:33:00 PM Wow, very stimulating, exquisitely done, Aloha William... Login to Reply