Get Your Premium Membership

Fresh Fire

Echoes of loud voice sound of that of trumpet noise of joy and celebration blinking in dark without blinks thoughts of paradise was all in me fear becomes my best friend as I saw the crowd tripping my pen became my companion still with thousands of opinion I was soon lost in it's atmosphere feeling like an illuminate I saw myself doing a soneat yet enjoys the concept weaving for a composure yet drunk in it's fire It's a fresh fire burning with a fresh vision yet can make you loose your mind Cause the have war with words like a camouflage soldiers no retreat no surrender the fire burns with fresh ideas.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/8/2016 11:38:00 AM
Nicely expressed... This sure makes me want to read another one... Love the desire in your poems....Linda
Login to Reply
Date: 4/5/2012 9:17:00 AM
I hoe your fire never goes out. Great poem.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things