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French Visit

A French Visit 
 Early they arrived, my relatives, unpacking of suitcases, 
kissing, jubilation and breakfast, during which all the latest 
family gossip was shared. Then they all went to the beach 
leaving the house in utter chaos. When returning we had 
prepared a buffet, they had brought their wine, the French 
are skeptical to wine not made in their country… god, how
talked. I have a small house had to sleep in my study, got up 
at four working, but I liked the silence of people at slumber. 
About five there were stirrings, people going to the toilet 
and murmur of voices, I went back to bed or on my sofa. 
Woke up at ten, they had already breakfasted and ready to 
leave, kidded me for sleeping so late. Then an intense late
 talking, like everything had to be said and crammed into 
a few minutes, good byes lots of kisses and the old house 
settled back to its usual quietude.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/28/2012 2:16:00 PM
you've brought this scene to life very well. nice poem!
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 8/28/2012 3:44:00 PM
thank you iLene, I`m not musch for visitors
Date: 8/28/2012 8:30:00 AM
Garcon! Oh the French! Such a bad rep. Great poem. love, Kathy
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 8/28/2012 9:24:00 AM
yes them and the one finger salute in paris called the eiffel
Date: 8/28/2012 3:44:00 AM
I hope they cleaned up the mess : )
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 8/28/2012 5:20:00 AM
no girl celtic, we had to do that

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