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Freezing Rain

- My tears fall like freezing rain dripping from barren branches overhead, dampening my smile, replacing the sunrise with clouded sorrow as your heart breaks like thin ice in the winter of your sadness-

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Hello There

Date: 12/19/2019 12:03:00 AM

A heartfelt piece depicting the sadness and your compassionate heart so well, once again.

Chris Green
Date: 12/19/2019 8:20:00 AM

Thank you my friend. I always look forward to your visits and kind comments.

Na Na

Date: 12/16/2019 3:54:00 PM

a nice one Chris. You spell out the sadness and pain. Thanks for sharing

Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2019 4:13:00 PM

Thanks so much Greg.

John Hamilton

Date: 12/16/2019 1:02:00 PM

Like thin ice in the winter of your sadness, I thought you were describing Sandy, and looking at her comment I see I was right. This is going to be a classic melancholy piece, and I love it...into my faves, chock full of Chris Green poems!

Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2019 1:22:00 PM

I had just finished reading some of her poetry from the weekend and I could feel her sorrow and pain and wanted to post something that told her she wasn't alone. Thanks so much John.

Lin Lane

Date: 12/16/2019 11:47:00 AM

"Ain't no sunshine when she's gone..." Ain't none here either. Winter rains are on their way, and if I didn't love the rain, I'd be sad. Your image of rain falling from barren branches is perfect for setting the mood of your write.

Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2019 12:20:00 PM

Thanks so much Lin. Kind of a gloomy morning here today but now the sun is coming out and it appears it will be a beautiful afternoon.

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/16/2019 10:32:00 AM

It can be such a tough time of year and with everything else that is going on and can happen, it can feel just like this.! Well written Chris. I hope you have a beautiful day :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2019 11:28:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. I hope you have a beautiful day as well

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/16/2019 9:57:00 AM

Chris, This is sad and well written. I know what this kind of pain feels like. Great imagery and content. Well done my friend. Have a great day- Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 12/16/2019 11:28:00 AM

Thank you so very much Alexis.