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Freezing Cold Waters

Ice flowing down the river Freezing is its cold waters Don’t enter or go wading You’ll become frozen Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/30/2012 7:53:00 PM
yikes. I don't want to step into THAT particular water. I'll take Utah Lake. heehee! glad to see you again, Russell.
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Date: 4/29/2012 2:57:00 PM
Gave me a shiver Russell ;) These 'Haiku'-forms come so natural for you...well done...big hugs,love ya deb
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Date: 4/29/2012 2:52:00 PM
I can feel that cold water on my feet now. Good job, Russell.
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