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Freezer Burn

Instead of the phrase, “brain freeze” at times we avow Blurted out, “freezer burn” pointing between my brows Wife Cathie took a fit Convulsed quite a bit Finally got control before the neighbours she aroused © Jack Ellison 2015

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Carol Eastman

Date: 5/18/2015 6:22:00 PM

At least you didn't lip lock in the arctic frozen North! Might not have been able to seperate you two until Spring Thaw!... LOL...

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/18/2015 6:25:00 PM

That wouldn't have been all that bad!!! LOL xxxxxxxx

Skat A

Date: 5/18/2015 1:00:00 AM

good one Jack, I enjoyed the poem, thanks for sharing. Luv SKAT

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/18/2015 5:49:00 AM

Awww Thanks for dropping by dear friend! Happy to hear you enjoyed my silly nonsense! Love, Jack xxx

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/17/2015 10:59:00 PM

LOVE this one! Hysterical! Always,Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/18/2015 5:47:00 AM

Sometimes what comes out doesn't always match what I'm thinking! LOL Huggsies, Jack xxxxxxx

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/17/2015 8:12:00 PM

Glad Cathie can keep you in line! I can imagine your whiskers twitching while trying to stop laughing...haha

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/17/2015 10:05:00 PM

Hey Kimmie, have you been behaving yourself while I was away? Silly me... of course you have!!! Love Jack xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/17/2015 1:34:00 PM

Oh Kenny!!! You've been missed! Judy wrote a poem about ya! ;) You are something else. Give Cathie my love. She has her hands full with you.

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/17/2015 7:55:00 PM

I've missed you too Miss Boop and all my sweet loveable friends here! What would I do without youse!!! Love, Jack xxx

Judy Konos

Date: 5/17/2015 12:10:00 PM

Ohh lah lah...Cathy arouses everybody in the neighborhood! Watch out Jack...don't want to lose your number one...cleaner upper....

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/17/2015 7:52:00 PM

Cathie sure arouses ME!!! Hey Judith, love ya girl... hugs, Jacko xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 5/17/2015 10:03:00 AM

As long as she doesn't put you in that big old freezer you'll be fine

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/17/2015 7:46:00 PM

You're scaring me dear Tim! Going to be watching her every second of the day now!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2015 9:10:00 AM

so you ARE here. Judy's poem drew me here. GLAD to see you have posted more limericks. Let me see a few more.

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/17/2015 9:13:00 AM

I ain't got nuttin' else!!! LOL Thanks for the welcome back, Andrea... huggsies xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 5/17/2015 7:45:00 AM

lol - you should be on holiday resting not on soup and jesting! hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/17/2015 7:51:00 AM

Had to get back as soon as I could with all my Soup buddies! Missed you all a big big bunch! Luv ya dear sis, Jack xxx

Anna Hopper

Date: 5/17/2015 7:45:00 AM

Silly, creative and clever!

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/17/2015 7:52:00 AM

YUP!!! Jack is my name, silly is my game!!! Huggsies, Jacko xxx