Freefall

Snow fell from a tree And a thought came to me Maybe don't hold on so tight - Let it be - Freefall in the daylight A soft, quiet, landing Seek the new impressions to be found upon landing Heidi Sands 1/26/24 (C)opyright

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/29/2024 3:33:00 PM

Hello Heidi, I just this poem. It will be my fav. Hugs./ Darlene/

Joseph May

Date: 1/27/2024 11:20:00 AM

Beautifully penned Heidi, enjoyed

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/27/2024 12:19:00 PM

Thanks Joseph :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/27/2024 5:48:00 AM

Maybe don't hold on so tight - Let it be - A powerful message succinctly conveyed, my friend. Wonderful imagery as well, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/27/2024 7:42:00 AM

Hi Vijay. Thank you for your kind comment. I hope you have a nice day :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/26/2024 8:47:00 PM

Such a great point. I like the idea of allowing the mind to discover new things without trying.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/27/2024 4:36:00 AM

Thank you very much Hilda. I appreciate your feedback. I hope you have a nice day :)

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 1/26/2024 6:02:00 PM

A great message in this poem Heidi. Let go of the things holding you back and enjoy the ride. Have a great weekend, my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/27/2024 4:35:00 AM

Thank you very much Jerry. I hope you enjoy today :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/26/2024 4:13:00 PM

while reading your poem, I felt like a free falling snowflake, graceful and trusting in the new impressions waiting for me on the ground. Exquisite...faving it,

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/27/2024 4:34:00 AM

Thank you so much Sara. I am happy to see your comment. I appreciate the Fave I hope you have a great day :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 1/26/2024 2:38:00 PM

Hello Heidi :-) Your poem remind me with gravitation & Newton, (English mathematician and physicist; remembered for developing the calculus and for his law of gravitation and his three laws of motion (1642-1726).) Pithy write! Have so sweet time ~ AA

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/26/2024 3:48:00 PM

Interesting. Thank you Abdullah . I appreciate your comments :)