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Freefall

Snow fell from a tree
And a thought came to me
Maybe don't hold on so tight
       - Let it be -

Freefall in the daylight
A soft, quiet, landing
Seek the new impressions
to be found upon landing

Heidi Sands

1/26/24

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/29/2024 3:33:00 PM Hello Heidi, I just this poem. It will be my fav. Hugs./ Darlene/ Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 1/27/2024 11:20:00 AM Beautifully penned Heidi, enjoyed Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/27/2024 12:19:00 PM Thanks Joseph :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/27/2024 5:48:00 AM Maybe don't hold on so tight - Let it be - A powerful message succinctly conveyed, my friend. Wonderful imagery as well, Heidi. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/27/2024 7:42:00 AM Hi Vijay. Thank you for your kind comment. I hope you have a nice day :)

Hilda Greenhough Date: 1/26/2024 8:47:00 PM Such a great point. I like the idea of allowing the mind to discover new things without trying. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/27/2024 4:36:00 AM Thank you very much Hilda. I appreciate your feedback. I hope you have a nice day :)

Jerry Brotherton Date: 1/26/2024 6:02:00 PM A great message in this poem Heidi. Let go of the things holding you back and enjoy the ride. Have a great weekend, my friend. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/27/2024 4:35:00 AM Thank you very much Jerry. I hope you enjoy today :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 1/26/2024 2:38:00 PM Hello Heidi :-) Your poem remind me with gravitation & Newton, (English mathematician and physicist; remembered for developing the calculus and for his law of gravitation and his three laws of motion (1642-1726).) Pithy write! Have so sweet time ~ AA Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 1/26/2024 3:48:00 PM Interesting. Thank you Abdullah . I appreciate your comments :)