Freefall

Even when things are in pieces, apart Everything is going to be alright A new flower bloomed, embracing a new start Through the curtain, there will be a crack of light Shining in darkness, where dreams will ignite Everything is going to be alright Trust is renewed, relying on insight Relief is within your open heart now Shining in darkness, where dreams will ignite There’s always a way to make it somehow Relying on instincts, let yourself go Relief is within your open heart now Releasing the words, while letting them flow Some things take time to make sense after all Relying on instincts, let yourself go Take new chances, letting yourself freefall Even when things are in pieces, apart Some things take time to make sense after all A new flower bloomed, embracing a new start Heidi Sands 9/24/19

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Hello There

Date: 9/24/2019 8:48:00 PM

Wow, this is a special piece of writing, providing encouragement to all of us to have faith, trust our instincts, and take that leap ~ a fav for me <3

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/24/2019 8:54:00 PM

I am happy to hear that. Thank you for considering it a favorite. I appreciate your visit. Have a nice evening :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/24/2019 3:30:00 PM

I think that this is just a masterful rendering of a beautiful, inspirational message utilizing the terzanelle format. Bravo, Heidi!! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/24/2019 3:36:00 PM

Thank you so much Gershon. I appreciate your support and the positive feedback means a lot to me :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/24/2019 3:07:00 PM

I like the sound of this form and you do such a good job with your rhythm and flow. I liked the upbeat notion: A new flower bloomed, embracing a new start. A lovely write, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/24/2019 3:36:00 PM

I am always happy to hear your feedback Vijay and appreciate it very much. Thank you! :)

Chris Green

Date: 9/24/2019 3:02:00 PM

Beautiful poem, beautiful message. Nicely said my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/24/2019 3:35:00 PM

Thank you very much Chris. Your positive message brings a smile :)