Freefall

Even when things are in pieces, apart
Everything is going to be alright
A new flower bloomed, embracing a new start

Through the curtain, there will be a crack of light
Shining in darkness, where dreams will ignite
Everything is going to be alright

Trust is renewed, relying on insight
Relief is within your open heart now
Shining in darkness, where dreams will ignite

There’s always a way to make it somehow
Relying on instincts, let yourself go
Relief is within your open heart now

Releasing the words, while letting them flow
Some things take time to make sense after all
Relying on instincts, let yourself go

Take new chances, letting yourself freefall
Even when things are in pieces, apart
Some things take time to make sense after all
A new flower bloomed, embracing a new start


Heidi Sands   

9/24/19

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Hello There

Date: 9/24/2019 8:48:00 PM

Wow, this is a special piece of writing, providing encouragement to all of us to have faith, trust our instincts, and take that leap ~ a fav for me <3

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/24/2019 8:54:00 PM

I am happy to hear that. Thank you for considering it a favorite. I appreciate your visit. Have a nice evening :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/24/2019 3:30:00 PM

I think that this is just a masterful rendering of a beautiful, inspirational message utilizing the terzanelle format. Bravo, Heidi!! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/24/2019 3:36:00 PM

Thank you so much Gershon. I appreciate your support and the positive feedback means a lot to me :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/24/2019 3:07:00 PM

I like the sound of this form and you do such a good job with your rhythm and flow. I liked the upbeat notion: A new flower bloomed, embracing a new start. A lovely write, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/24/2019 3:36:00 PM

I am always happy to hear your feedback Vijay and appreciate it very much. Thank you! :)